Wait, you’re leaving it like that?!

No you can’t leave it like this! Everyone is separated and that part about Alphonse at the end...

This is such a unique story. Great characterization and story. Please, please continue! I want to know what’s going on with Alphonse and how Mustang’s blind vision is going to play into things. Not to mention he needs to reunite with Riza and Ed!

Thank you for writing and sharing this unique idea in the first place. I’m sorry I haven’t reviewed every chapter, but it truly has been a great read. :D

More characters died than intended? You freaking killed most of them, how cruel XD
Nice chapter Btw! Keep it up ;)

while i am a little sad to see you drop it, knowing youll keep going but with one shots leaves really hopeful, since you are more confortable with wrinting them and is not abandoning the idea altogether.
That being said, i just wanna say that i really enjoyed this story and you wrote the characters really well, not to mention the more tense scenes(witch were amazing).Well done!

Another great chapter!Story is shaping up nicely,great job!

Oh Ed, poor kid. Somebody needs to give him a hug, if only he'd let them. I get the feeling Ed's heading for a breakdown and it's not gonna be pretty when it happens. Still, I liked how there wasn't even a moment of hesitation for Ed when May showed him her Philosopher's Stone. He's already learned that lesson all too well. Poor May, I hope it's a lesson she doesn't have to learn the hard way.

Noooooooo!Alphonse! Why? Okay, okay, I know that's just the nature of the genre, but it still hurts. And yeah, I guess that's the point, so well done I guess. But still. Ow. My poor sweet sunshine boy. And now we get Roy's perspective. I think you've handled his blindness, and his frustration with it, very well. You've done a great job through all these past chapters of getting us into the head of the POV character. It's shame we won't get to see Al's perspective again, I really liked how you wrote him. Sniff. At least we got some Royai at the end there.

"had attracted the sacrifices, or so they had decided to call them." I like that a lot. I think it fits well with the setting and sounds completely logical that that's what these characters would naturally decide. I also really like the way you write Alphonse, I think you do a good job of getting into what emotions he would be feeling in this situation and how he would be reacting to suddenly having a body again. I also like how observant he is of other people, I think that really fits with his character.

Why Alphonse, whyyyy?
You are so freaking cruel!
Not to be mean or anything XD

That ending line though...
This story is pretty interesting, I don't usually read fam zombie stories but this one got me, all the way from the plot to your writing style, really on point, good luck!
~DarkFlameFantasy

Great action! I love how you write Ed. I can't wait to see how they get out of this one!

Damn, I kinda forgot about General and Major Armstrong. Tbh, I thought they had made it to the center of the transmutation circle, I guess it's been a while since I watched FMA B. And the fact that it seems that Izumi is beginning to lose all hope, I mean, she lost Sig and with the zambies starting to come alive she's probably scared to death of losing Ed and Al. And last chapter tho...Hayate...poor Hawkeye. Why would you do this to my poor heart D; Also, we don't really know whether Fuery, Breda and Rebecca are alive, I mean I hope they are but they might not be. I really do hope that Winry and Pinako are somehow alive. And pretty please don't pull a Glenn on us, anything but that. I don't think my heart could take that again, especially with these guys. Anyhow great chapters so far! I'm loving it, can't wait for the next one!

omg so spooky i fell out of my chair! this fic is so good so far, the way you write all of the characters makes for such a compelling and intriguing plot that lets you really understand what everything thinks about it. i can't wait to see what heartbreaking things you do later on, but this total of four (chapters) has been amazing!

Great chapter! Things are really kicking off now. I'm excited to see where you take this.

I love this, it's really good so far! I liked the way you wrote this first part from Mei's perspective, it gives us a new angle and a new way too look at the aftermath of the promised day. Keep it up!