I loved your story, the ending in particular, though I wish Aldo had lived to and that Booth had been able to help him like Aldo had helped Booth so much. Keep up the good work.
Jenny

I think this is a hilarious story, till Booth lost his memory I cried but I like your version better.

Thank you! This is the fix-it fic I needed T_T

Great story! I really enjoyed it! Although I hated that Max died, I felt it was the ultimate redemption for his character, dying to keep his grandkids safe, showing Bones she could trust him and that the only way he was leaving her again was through death.

A wonderful story.

I liked it a lot and am glad that you left them alive.

I'm glad you didn't kill Vincent off. Other than Sweets that was the toughest death on the show to me. Max was older and had lived his life, but Sweets and Vincent were so young.

I think this was well done. You decided not to do Palant? An epilogue would be great.

good chapter and I wouldn't have like to see Vincent die either. I like your ending.

I liked that Max played Si many important roles in this version, esp saving Vincent. I’d love to read an epilogue. If it is set in S12, then there are so many things that could have happened - like babies.

Great update... hope you work things out... just think of all the good times sometimes that helps when you fall into a dark place

I live your story, sorry things are so rough for you and hope things get better

I think the story feels complete. You did a good job. I hope you’ Sort out whatever is going on in your life. Take it from a 3 Times cancer survivor, life is worth living and worth living well!

Great chapter! I’m excited to read more

I like this chapter very much. It did explain some things in the story. I am glad that a lot was over come. I like how you were using the same story but not in the same way it was in the episodes. I am sorry you haven't been feeling well and I hope the things that seem to be falling on you clear up soon. I do hope the next chapter doesn't take to long.