I just wanted to say I enjoyed your story. I hope you post more tbh but if you dropped it I'll respect your choice.

awh, was Hinata gathering food to go with Tokuma an Tsunade to give it to them? I wanna cry, she's so gentle unu.
I thought Naruto would be hidden in the swirl country, u know, because Uzumaki clan lived there, and the were just searching in the 5 great nations

i forgot how short your chapters were so i finished this pretty quickly but i was just reacquainting myself with this story. i’m just disappointed it’s been 2 years & you said it’d be a couple months? idk i had hope for this story but i guess now it’s just another one to add to the list of unfinished fanfics.

Wonderful story
Someday Will have a conclusion?

I hope for

Your story is good but how is this going to end. I mean is hinata going to fall in love with madara and side with him? I really hope not cuz after everything that has happened to her I would assume she wouldn’t fall for him. Or what about sasuke? Is he going to change his mind and be on the good side later on b/c of hinata? Or is hinata going to actually play the part of making madara fall for her and then betray him? So many things can happen with this story.i just hope u dont make her fall for madara just cuz he pays attention to her. That would make her look like the bad guy

Wow, your story is really fun, sad you didn't continue!(((

Man, after reading this, i must say that while i love SasuHina i kind of want Hinata with Neji. I know you also love NejiHina and it would be cute if she escaped from the hands of the Uchiha and eloped with Neji XD Madara is scum and Sasuke...he tries very hard but i think it would be unrealistic if Hinata forgave either of them and fell in love with them. Plus i don't like it when fics portray him as someone who had many past experiences with woman while Hinata is pure and falls in love with him. And here he has this kind of experience too. So i want Hinata to escape (that would make them even more furious and obsessed over her) and also some NejiHina if you don't mind ;)

Please update this story is amazing

Reading on

Please please please continue! Already read this story through once! Can’t wait to read it again!

Dun dun duuuun! and Madara's walls came crashing at the realization

I very much enjoy your story and I hope all is well! The slow pace of the relationships really works for this story and I'm interested in seeing how the interaction between all three characters will go! No rush on the update, focus on you first! Thanks for the story!

SO EXCITED TO SEE MORE, this is a seriously awesome fanfic, I'm so curious about what the rebels reactions are going to be when they learn of Hinata

“But if Hiashi had a mistress….then he was screwed.”
Omfg nearly died laughing at that! This story is amazing. I’m hoping for a sasuhina ending where he helps take down Madara. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. Sasuke’s gonna lose it when he finds out about Hina being a consort. Poor him. Also yay for taking Obito out of the play in style! Love the underhandedness of Sakura and Kakashi there.

I also really like your writing style. The short chapters are so precise and there’s never a boring or long winded part. Great flow and consistently moving the plot line forward. Amazing!

Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens next!