I loved the story! I think this is the first Chocolate Factory/Naruto story I've overseen much less read and I enjoyed every bit of it. (Shukaku was my favorite—he was /hysterical/)

someone get baki a raise for dealing with all that bullshit

I feel like there should have been more consequences of Wonka trying to kill people, just saying. Also illegal immigration and the slave thing too. How lucky are they that there where undercover agents to make sure they didn't die because if they didn't die its not like attempted manslaughter of children or anything. Even if none of the children died its still child endangerment at the least. At least in the original movie there was safety precautions and warnings not to do dumb things (he did not sound like he met them, but at least he have them).