So I am unable to read this chapter it literally just looks like an entire page of coding for a game or something. Idk what is going on it happens on the other chapter as well.

This is going to be sad...but happy...but sad...either way I really look forward to this I love bumblebee reunion fics. I can see Yang saying they never broke up and just keep on denying it if they get back together also one question...what is Black Fire? is that another name for Bumblebee?

Chapter two is sad... but still amazing you inspired me to write my own story so thanks for that. Please keep writing

same

Oohh, good start! Can't wait to see where you go with this