Ughhhhh, Murphy died?!
I'm crying right now, I love this! Very well written.

I just died a little on the inside... trying not to tear up on my break during class...

I put it as the first charter but by that I meant the first chapter of the story and not the prologue or what I considered the prologue so I mean Chapter 3

It’s really well written and I am really interested in it but I don’t get the Abby hate. I know I’m on the first chapter but still. At this point in Clarke’s life she has already know about what her mom did for a decent amount of time and has more or less forgiven her or at the very least accepted what her mother did and that she can’t change it so why loose a second parent. The Abby hate so far has caused her to make unrealistic decisions like who cares if you hate your mom that bracelet is telling the ark your alive and can save all the lives up there but no be petty and upset your mom. I’m sorry I’m being mean but I never get why there is Abby hate like that. I do really like your writing though and other than that I really like the story so far

Great chapter I loved it so much omfg

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Great chapter I loved it so much omfg

Great chapter I loved it so much

Great chapter I loved it so much

Great chapter I loved it so much omfg

Great chapter I loved it so much

Great chapter I loved it so much omfg

Great chapter I loved it so much

Great chapter I loved it so much omfg