Well... that’s truly a dark, horrifying ending.

Makes too much damn sense too, and...

Fuck.

Ozpin’s negligence didn’t just kill Pyyrha. It killed Jaune too.

I really like this you should make it a series

Hella spooky. I know this may be selfish, but is there a chance for an alternate ending?

meh very boring

There needs to be a third chapter where some kind of hopeful ending happens, maybe Jaune can call help from something via telepathy or take over cinder grim parasite.

well, looks like jaune's dead.

fuck you

This could have been so much worse.

I'm fearful of what could have happened if Salem had ordered Cinder to capture Jaune instead of kill him.

I do not want to imagine what Salem would do with this Jaune's Semblance at her disposal.

I a

queue the unknown savior

h-holy hell dude... like dang... that was really good, like I really enjoy how you portrayed Salem, good job my dude!

this was without a doubt one of the best depictions of Salem that I have seen on this sight. thank you for the amazing read!

honestly, am i the only one that wants jaune to NOT die? mainly because it would be more interesting?

God damn. Well done. I say, well done.

Very rarely have I seen a well-executed humor/horror fic in other fandoms. This was damn well written. It started off with a solid humor hook and then took a complete turn in the second chapter.

I mean, first chapter was getting sucked in with the laughs and the goofiness. Second chapter was the cruel reality behind the fun. Seriously, you went full on Stephen King in chapter 2 and I damn well love it. Kudos! :)

Keep up

Great story though.