| Reviews for Time Rewinded |
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  Guest chapter 20 . 9/21 Tyriooon |
 BaddieDZ2 chapter 1 . 7/24 Maybe you should learn to spell. Also, learn what a comma is, maybe? I don't think you used once correctly even once. Right from the get go, I can only assume you're either a mentally ill monkey, or dropped out of the first grade. What a terrible start to a story lmao |
| Iuvenis Astra chapter 1 . 7/18 I didn't read the lines after that, whoops |
| Iuvenis Astra chapter 3 . 7/18 Oh shot mvm |
| Iuvenis Astra chapter 3 . 7/18 The place where Tywin says that he doesn't mind women working with blades, that was a bit wrong I believe. When Cersei Lannister in her childhood, wished to learn swordplay, I'm pretty sure that Tywin and Joanna both forbid her. I think, because she was always complaining a bout how she wished she was born with a 'cock', and wasn't able to do the things men did. Or perhaps that was canon? |
| Mika the Supreme Ninja chapter 12 . 3/12 The only flaw I see in this chapter is basically you put all the blame on the failure of the their marriage on Circe when honestly Robert was just as bad and actually was pretty abusive. Both parties are pretty bad but you made it seem as only cersei made mistakes |
| jeremiahkelley93 chapter 20 . 12/22/2019 excellent story. |
| JustVisitingkk chapter 9 . 11/23/2019 ok... I'm sorry but everytime you keep misusing/mispelled "through" as "threw", and it keep pissing me off... I hope some readers had informed you, and you have correct the mistake by the next few chapters. |
| JustVisitingkk chapter 9 . 11/23/2019 ok... I'm sorry but everytime you keep misusing/mispelled "through" as "threw", and it keep pissing me off... I hope some readers had informed you, and you have correct the mistake by the next few chapters. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/5/2019 Great story but you need a BETA immediately. Marcella's name is wrong, through not threw and countless other mistakes make the story hard to read and makes it easy to lose interest. |
| BrentNewland chapter 20 . 8/12/2019 "Stannis Baratheon sat in his sola," Solar, not sola "placed a soft hand on his check" Cheek. You make this mistake quite a few times in one section. |
| BrentNewland chapter 18 . 8/12/2019 "Whites" Wights. Wait. Do you mean "White Walkers"? Because either use their full name or call them Others. Calling them "Whites" make it seem like you're just misspelling the zombies name. |
| BrentNewland chapter 17 . 8/12/2019 "defector ruler" defacto |
| BrentNewland chapter 13 . 8/12/2019 You really underestimate the distances and times in your story. It's about 650 miles from Winterfell to Castle Black. About 2-3,000 miles from Castle Black to King's Landing. Westeros is about 9,000 miles long and up to 900 miles wide. It wouldn't take 2 days for Jon to get from the Gift to Winterfell. It would take more like 5-7 days. |
| BrentNewland chapter 5 . 8/11/2019 I'm surprised you didn't give Jon a winter colored dragon. And Tyrion a gold dragon. |
