I thoroughly enjoyed myself with this story. The fight scenes were fun and I really felt immersed in it.
Even if you weren't satisfied with the final product, I enjoy this interpretation of Jaune, along with what came of his interaction with Pyrrha.
Thanks for recommending this to me.

The story isn't bad, I just think the summary is incorrect. By that I mean the summary says this is a story about Jaune growing and makes clear he is the protagonist, but he doesn't really do anything. He seems to function as a plot device for Pyrrha more than anything else.

Very nice!