I love this so much

adorable!

I have to say, that's one of the best one-shots I've read lately. I love that you make rachel a normal teen and good friend of the two, because I've seen people hating her although she's a great character and never did anything. I mean, people like Luke although he did a lot wrong and was annabeths crush. come on people, why can't she have a crush, huh? anyways, all characters are perfectly written, something not many people can do. it's a scenario I can imagine very well and that's something I appreciate. keep on writing, you have great potential in my opinion to some time write a story completly on your own, no fanfic.

Aww dis is cute

This was GREAT! I haven’t read a lot of Percabeth fic recently, but this fixed all of that! I don’t think I’ve read such a Percabeth fanfic that’s written so beautifully concept-wise and prose-wise actually capture the nuances and subtleties of Percy and Annabeth’s characters (both as individuals and a couple). Usually you get either the characterisation or the concept—God doesn’t usually give with both hands. But this had both! So, great job!