Can't wait for the next chapter.

Lovely Tweek... Bad, bad Craig, it's getting really interesting. Also this is really descriptive, I'm in love with your writing.

Really, enjoying it so far can't wait for part 2

Might be worth proofreading again, but that’s just me nitpicking because this is a really great first chapter. Not to mention, I'm a slut for the thesaurus and I’m loving the choice of synonyms here... So, please update soon because I’m dying to know why they’re not friends.