| Reviews for Return of the Lords of Nature (Toby) |
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   DJ-Dude2649 chapter 22 . 1/12 Please update this story it's amazing! |
| Adventurer Retro chapter 2 . 6/21/2019 I’m actually surprised, this is really good. The first 3 chapters were amazing, the part where Jessica and Toby meet is great. For example, the fact that it was Ike Pinkney bullying Jessica was quite well written. In the part where they’re drawing what happened to Toby and Jessica over the holiday is smart because their activities were related to their elements. Toby was swimming, obviously related to water. Jessica was looking for shapes in the clouds it relates to her as the Lord of Air and Nick playing in the sand and sand is associated with Earth. This is a good fan story and that’s staying a lot. |
| DJ-Dude2649 chapter 21 . 5/10/2019 Yet another reason why your a great writer Keep it up! |
| DJ-Dude2649 chapter 20 . 5/3/2019 Please update! I love this story so much! |
| Wiki the human chapter 1 . 3/30/2019 So cute x3 |
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/28/2019 OMG DEY KISSED XD |
| fcrcycyrc chapter 12 . 12/13/2018 Like your chapters. |
| Guest chapter 19 . 11/4/2018 Good chapter cannot wait for the next one |
| r3Xuj chapter 1 . 9/3/2018 Veri n1c3VRIst0riUb |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2018 Could you try and incorporate more about Jessica and her mum it sounds interesting |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2018 Blizzardstorming Age idk like 16 Breakup |
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/7/2018 Jessica and Maddison should have a fight |
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/7/2018 Please update this fic more frequently I am totally obsesseddddd |
| MeerkatMario chapter 15 . 4/22/2018 This is going good so far. By the way, what are you going to do with this fanfic when you eventually run out of canon storyline episodes? |
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/19/2018 Loving the new chapter this one was rlly good |
