Much like all your other writing, this story was utterly fantastic. I cried several times while reading it - but was overjoyed to reach the HEA.

I...I want to say so much about this but nothing feels adequate. So I'll simply say:
Wow.
Thank you.
Yes.

You are a truly excellent storyteller.

Wow, just Wow!

I am enjoying this story but I have one small quibble here: separating Jane and Bingley made Lizzys match with Collins all the more necessary, so Darcy helped to shackle them together, however slightly. I’m not sure I’d consider the action only Janes business were I Lizzy, but I’d agree it’s definitely more Janes than Lizzys.

I found it interesting that you ended the last chapter with Caroline Bingley who apparently was so miserable and unhappy that she tried to commit suicide only to be saved by Kitty. I couldn't tell if Kitty and Caroline 's weddings occurred five years after Netherfield or 10 years after Netherfield. Caroline would have been in her 30s and Kitty in her late 20s.

I have not commen Ted on a chapter son s Elizabeth some and found Lady Catherine sitting next to her. I didn't see this one coming! Mr. Bennet puts the two most hated men together with Bingley 's help and gets rid of Collins and Wickham as they fight each other to the death! Of, course the personage catches on fire and burns to the ground.

What did a do to Lady Catherine? She is almost human! Collins attack on Elizabeth and Anne must have been a road to Damascus event in her done!

This is the saddest chapter of all! Elizabeth reveals her scarred legs to Darcy and explains why she will never marry again. How will Darcy help her?

Yes, Darcy has a long way to go before Elizabeth will begin to speak with him without trying to get rid of him. Her father was worse than I thought. To force her to marry without a marriage settlement was hidious. Obviously, Bennet never considered the fact that Collins could fall ill and die before he did. How pathetic! No wonder Elizabeth is so disgusted and full of hatred, yet her father has the unmitigated gaul to call her stubborn, selfish, and silly!

I am surprised that Darcy did not fall to his knees at Elizabeth's delivery of her feelings about him and the entire Bingley party! At least she came to her senses about Wickham, but she realized that Darcy could have told her the truth about Wickham and Bingley. How will Darcy handle this? Actually, this is worse than what Mary said to Darcy and her family in "The Cliffs of Hertfordshire."

Wow! I actually laughed at some of the things that Elizabeth said to Bennet! I think poor Darcy was flabbergasted to know what her father had done to her and how she had changed. How will Darcy respond to what he overheard?

Lord, what a way to begin a novel! What is Lydia's shame? Am I to assume that it has something to do with George Wickham? How on earth did he become related to the Bennets? What a horrible thought and reality! Perhaps the Colonel can get rid of him. The tongue lashing that Elizabeth gave to her father is one for the history books! Who knew that she could become so bitter and angry? Thank goodness he doesn't want to marry the Bennet daughters. There is some blessing in that!

This is absolutely one of my all-time favorites stories. I like basically everything Wade H has written (and the quality of the writing and editing is always excellent), but this one just grabs me. I love the changing points of view and the story itself is addicting.

That was a surprise. Wickham is the dastardly rapist! What an evil man. I didn't;t expect that. Good twist.