Reviews for Dedicated Hearts made Fullmetal
WhatTheWhyEverythingIsTaken chapter 48 . 8/26
Yes finally it's here!

I loved the chapter, most of all I wondered how Mina would fare against others shifters. She is still quite new to all this so I thought she would be a good match for Porco who had Jaws for as long as she had female.

And with Zeke missing arm, you hinted that his aim was a little bit off, so it made me wonder if you made him threw Berthold in direction of Eren house and that's where Al and the rest of the scouts ended in. But personally I don't really see any reason to do that for multiple reasons. First is that they are in middle of a fight now, so their priority would be get back and help others. The second is that the exit had been blocked but that doesn't mean they can't get out, with Alchemy it should be quite easy but they have a limited oxygen in there, so it's another reason to get on surface quickly. The third is that it's not like the basement was signed as 'This is Grisha Yeager basement', so for them it could be any other basement and thus they don't have time to search through it. And of course Grsha didn't left those books straight on his desk, they are quite well hidden and thus again they don't have time for search.

Well if you still want to do it(I mean I don't know if it's true, maybe it's just me overthinking things :D) then do it, if you think it's important. But my opinion would be that they don't have time for that now.
Icarus636 chapter 48 . 8/25
Hello, awesome chapter! Good update!

The battle was intense, it is amazing seeing all the cannon casualties (Nanaba, Nifa, Hannes, Gelgar, etc) gathered here as the leading force behind the entire operation with Ed, Al, Mina, Armin and Hange as the game changers. Good work with the cannons and artillery, this is the moment of truth; no pun intended for the people of the walls. Hoping to see Levi vs the Beast Titan showdown, hopefully with Ed and Armin suporting him, fighting both the jaws and cartman titan.

As for Al and Mina, hope to see the development of their relationship once Mina discovers that she only has 13 years left to live; with the whole alchemists corps to be born. I think the best idea for Ed and Al is to guide the creation of an alchemist institution after all, if they do not warn them about the dangers of human transmutation; gold open transmutation or the philosopher stone then that could lead the people of Paradis to a very dark path. In any case I am eager to see the next chapter,.

Also good luck with your master dissertation; I am also working in my own master's degree so I know how hard is to put time into fanfiction
Peregrine Prince chapter 48 . 8/25
Wonderful Chapter.
Especially the decision to factor in the many veterans who were killed along the way. Glad to see you using them efficiently.
GM10 chapter 48 . 8/25
Holy. Shit. The secret is about to be know and Eren isn't going to be the first one to know.
I will be anticipating the next chapter with excitement!
Cieszesi Niezmiernie chapter 48 . 8/25
Yey! A new chapter how nice. Must say it's interesing how will this turn out. I am almost sure that warriors extra help is warhammer titan but who knows.

If I am right then it wouldn't be strange for Levi to go after it either if it transform in front of the shiganshima entrance just where canons are. But I actually wonder how would Levi vs warhammer turn out. In normal cirtumances Levi should always win but if after cutting throught war hammer neck he would let his guard down(I mean why wouldn't he? No matter if it's a titan or titan shifter a weak point is always in the neck, he shouldn't be suspicious of anything), then it could end up pretty badly for him too and paradis side. Maybe he wouldn't die, reading a manga we know that Levi is a little like a cockroach too but he would end up quite injured I think

Mina is still a little unsure of herself I hope she will be able to overcome it soon, for me it doesn't matter that she wasn't in top 10, everything rides on how many experience will you gather being real solider.

And the end scene, I wonder how well did Zeke throwed with his left arm. What if he throwed Berthold in a direction of Eren home? Maybe that's the basement they hided in is his? But even if it's Eren it's not like they know this and they don't even have a time to searh it so it doesn't matter. With Alchemy they should be able to escape easly.

Until next time! I hope your Master disseration will get through without any problems too.
ian12091995 chapter 48 . 8/25
Noice.
Apocrypha chapter 47 . 8/15
I also wonder how good can mina use hardering. When Eren is creating his hardened fists it's a little different from Annie, cuz he focuses all of it in one place so it's way more durable. It's not something that Annie did, but since Eren and Mina had experiments together then I think she also should be albe to do that.

Hope you will be able to update soon, I miss this story :P
WhatTheWhyEverythingIsTaken chapter 47 . 7/25
I really like your story and now I can't help but spectatulate, hope you will forgive me. Please brace yourself cuz this will be long as hell :D

First we have a Porco here, so we can assume that Ymir is already dead and that gives more warriors on the paradis. That how it looks when you look at it for the first time, but there is still their 'Ace' how Zeke called it. He mentioned that it's already a opposite of their strict policy, so the only thing that comes to mind is that the survey corps have to fight not 5 shifters but 6. Ace in the cards is porbably a member of Tybur family and a war hammer titan... That's will be tough.

But they won't expect Mina to be a female titan, so that's a plus on paradis side too. I wonder how will her role look like here. Possibly Eren will have to fight war hammer, armor and jaws at the same time so she could support him. But on the another side I wonder if it wouldn't be better for her to go after Beast titan. There isn't a single mindless titan in shiganshima so her abbility to call titans to her is rather useless there. But if she managed to go on Zeke backs and then call titans then he would have some problems, but so would she so that's a pickle too.

The other thing is Armin alchemic genius. Al and Ed were told to be geniuses in alchemy but I can't help but think that they genius is vanishing in front of Armin. Al already told him that you make a philosopher stone with people souls but he can't just make it with only this information. But with how he managed to recreate a flame alchemy in a month or two, I think he would also be able to figure out how transmutation circle for making a philosopher stone should look like and the same with a need of a mark of blood(you know how to make a philosopher stone you first had to shed blood first and then you could make it, it was the same with a philosopher stone made by Marcoh from Ishibal people, they were shoot in the legs first and then made in stone). And about making a philosopher stone I must say that I am confused. It's evil yeah, but Armin reasoning is right. Armin is a person that is able to make sacrifices to protect those close to him, that's why I think he will do it in the end. Ed and Al will have mixed feelings about that no doubt.

While I am interested how will battle at shingashima go, I am also courius at how will all of this follow after the battle too.

First, after sealing a hole in wall maria it took Paradis one full year to kill all titans inside this wall. With Al and Ed there it will probably take less than that but still probably at least take half of the year. For Al and Ed time really isn't a issue, from what you made Truth to tell them in first chapter times operates differently in those two worlds. So when they will decide to return they won't be even aged plus one year in AOT unverse is one month in FMA universe, that's how you made it. But if they want to get 'demand' from truth they will have to see it thought a very end, so no going back after sealing a hole in the wall.

After that, paradis island will have to face a world. Right now everyone wants them dead but Marley will be in war for 4 years after a fail to get a funder titan. Paradis was really passive for those 4 years so I wonder how will you do that. This will be only my sugestion here, but what if Paradis will join the war with Marley? For example there is a oyaponko country. They were opressed by marley from what he told them, so with a power of titans(though they won't be having much of that, only Mina and Eren and maybe one more) and Alchemist corps they could suprise them and make his country part of nation of Eldia. If they freed the country and showed compassion to the civilians it would also send a different message to the world. And if that will go well then Eren won't have to go ape shit and kill everyone. If they want to go with a route of peace, then they just CAN'T make the same shit in libero just like it was in canon. That buried all their chance for peace in canon.

If you will create alchemy corps it will give paradis different weapon than rumbling. So they won't have to go with a plan of making historia into ape titan and turning her into a birth machine.

With Alchemy creating new buildings will also go a lot faster. It took them a year to create a port, with Alchemy it probably won't take them even a week. Most time it will take them transporting materials for buildings but that's it. So they will have a lot more time for everything. Plus Marley fleet. They send 32 ships to paradis and none returned. But paradis didn't capture all those ships, many were destroyed and given the size of the port they didn't even had a place to keep all of those 32 ships anyway. But Ed and Al can make a way bigger port so there is a profit in capturing all of 32 ships. With Ed and Al capturing those ships will be also easier. Also the handel with other countries. They primary asset to handle is iceburst stone. But now they can also handle with technology, meaning only Automail.

Also this is a personal hope of mine but I hope you won't kill Gabi just cuz. Her comparison to Eren personality is really interesing. I also wonder where you will take Al and Mina relationship. It's easy to guess what they did after Al closed the door and I wonder where they will go from there. Their feelings are obvious but they both are wondering where it will take them. Plus Mina has only 13 years left... :( That will hit Al hard when they find out.

Alright that's all I wanted to write(I think so). Wow it took longer that I thought, I will be impressed if you will read it all :D. I am glad that you want to finish this story, I am rooting for you :). Good luck with next chapter
Cieszesi Niezmiernie chapter 45 . 7/23
There is a little mistake here, Porco said that two marley's titan's were lost but they only lost female titan. They lost two warriors thought annie and Marcel, but they taken back marcel titan(ymir) and I am guessing that now when Porco is here he already ate ymir and he is jaw titan now
Guest chapter 46 . 7/21
Floch is kinda ooc here, he only becomes the guy we see post-timeskip after going through hell and back and shinganshina and then seeing Levi pretty much allow to die one of their best officers by purely selfish reasons. Before that he was a pretty average dude who would have no reason to pick a fight with Ed and Al, especially because he wasn't there at the time when the serum incident happened.
Yaknow WhatIming chapter 47 . 7/22
This story is a diamond in the rough, I usually ignore stories that have a shit load of chapters and not that many reviews but this is an exception, there's probably a couple chapters left before it's all finally over and humanity wins once and for all, it'd be fitting if the story concluded at chapter 50 but I'll have to wait and see along with everyone else.
Voltron chapter 1 . 7/19
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Cieszesi Niezmiernie chapter 47 . 7/6
I kinda hope you won't end up this fanfic on this arc, I really would want to see marleyan arc too. I also hope that if you decide to do it, you won't just kill Gabi like most people would do(she is an interesing character). Hope to see an update soon
Cieszesi Niezmiernie chapter 46 . 7/6
Floch turned to be an asshole only after he went on suicade mission and survived. Kinda messed up personality at this point, he was just cheerful guy back then
jetslinger333 chapter 47 . 7/6
It's finally here the battle with the beast Titan. Only this time the survey corps are prepared as they have alchemist among them like Armin and Hanji. And Erwin with a new arm to fight.
Not only that they have an ace in the hole the female Titan to fight of course if bertholdt knew he will go berserk. But no different than them as allowing Ymir to be devoured by Parco.
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