Every story I've read so far has ended up being a dissapointment. Every story but this one. Marvelous job! Jon sounded as Jon should. Dany did too. Already a favourite. It would amazing if ir could go from one-shot to something more. Congratulations. And thank you for the words.

Please continue

I hope they both make it.

i like it

Great story!

I'm sure a great many men would burn down entire cities to get back to her after hearing her say things like that. Enjoyed it!

So good! I really like the dialogue. Jon saying, "Stay anyway," over and over made me laugh.

Great chapter.
Even though this is supposed to be a one-shot, I think it'd be nice to read something about Daenerys' past next now that Jon told her about part of his.