cinder

No review in 4 chapters? Well that must be fixed!

So far so good, the chapters are of good length and everything is spelled correctly.

Also don’t worry about your update schedule as much. I’ve seen Fics come back from a 2 year wait with the same following maybe even bigger. It’s better to take your time and get a story you are happy with than to rush it. However that does not mean you should completely ignore a schedule.

I’m guessing this chapter is more of a filler to help progress the story and put something out in the mean time... not that it’s bad or anything just don’t do it too often

I wonder what yang has got planned for his week of torture :3

Keep doing what you are doing!

~Gabrion

looking forward to the next chapter, hope you pair Ebris with Velvet

Loving the story so far although I have to admit I was hoping for something for "frisky" to happen during the spin the bottle scene :P

I'm liking the characters so far and I'm pretty sure there are no spelling mistakes.

Keep up doing exactly what you're doing and the story will tried out excellent but with the experience you seem to have in writing it should be no problem :D

~Gabrion

Great story really like how its going keep up the great work :3