| Reviews for A Tale of Cloud City |
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Guest chapter 4 . 3/3/2019 Jedi of Grace, thank you for this story. It is achingly beautiful and painfully sweet. So much caring poured into your words! Well done! |
HappyLibra1 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018 cute feet and soft shoulders... |
MrsScruffyNerfherder chapter 4 . 11/16/2017 Thank you, I enjoyed it! Looking forward to the others. |
erindarroch chapter 4 . 11/15/2017 Han's guilt just gets me right in the feels! I, too, imagine he would have felt full of regrets at how things played out once they got to Bespin. This chapter is deeply affecting. Thank you for sharing. |
JCBS chapter 4 . 11/15/2017 Well, you just wrenched my heart out of my body. My poor Han and Leia! Looking forward to the next installments! |
knitzkampf chapter 4 . 11/14/2017 That was intense! |
luv15 chapter 4 . 11/13/2017 We know what is going to happen but it is still shocking! Nice to read their thoughts. |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/20/2017 Gaaaaah Jediofgrace you rip my heart out. You have such a poignant balance between tragedy and beauty, but you never veer into pathos; you have a rich eye for detail but also a taut pacing that makes us feel suspense although we know the pain is coming. They're so brave and tender in your hands, I'm so invested but it hurts because you're too good, ha! Last sentence is just devastating. -Cic |
thewritingpuss chapter 3 . 10/17/2017 This was my reward for doing what I needed today, and it was exactly what I needed. :) "Han couldn't hide his surprise. How could Luke possibly be wanted by Vader? He was just a kid!" ! So in-character! You do both Han and Leia perspectives well in your writing, and I really enjoyed seeing this from Han's POV. The tenderness between them is lovely. The moment when Han relaxes knowing Leia hasn't been touched is nice. "Blast this whole blasted day." The repetition of this paragraph (and the rest of it!) worked really well for me. My poor babies. :( Han knowing he was in shock was also a nice detail. AND THEN THEM HOLDING EACH OTHER! OMG! "If only this intimacy wasn't forced, if only they were somewhere else... He stroked her back, absorbing her warmth and enjoying the chance to hold her. He found the edge of her shirt and pulled it up, throwing all pretense and propriety to the wind to wrap his arms around her bare skin. She felt hot and wonderful. His eyelids grew heavy as he nodded off." *crying emoji* I loved this. "I don't know. He said... It would keep you alive." / Han gave a sardonic snort. "I guess that's good." lol this was a nice moment ! Very Han! " He reached and took her hand. Kissing her fingers, he soothed, "Hey, I'm okay. Stop fussing." STOP IT JEDI STOP IT ITS TOO GOOD STOP IT NOW ! Man that force vision was rough. :s A really good detail though- it makes sense she'd be getting them if Luke was! Really good chapter, I can't believe you did this to me- I mean, them. |
Mermaid 32 chapter 3 . 10/16/2017 Beautiful, beautiful story. I love how tenderly she cares for him. |
JCBS chapter 3 . 10/16/2017 Oh, why you gotta' break my heart with that last line about Chewie..? I'll admit, things feel pretty hopeless right now. :_( |
erindarroch chapter 2 . 10/16/2017 Gahhh, that moment when Leia says "They're going to hurt you" is so deeply affecting to me. The helplessness of it; the inevitability... So awful. (But so good!) I love this story. |
JCBS chapter 2 . 10/10/2017 Han giving Leia something to remember literally choked me up: I fought back tears when he was taken away. I loved that you had him voice his desire for her to wait for him (though that also made me sad, knowing what's about to happen). Favorite line: "Leia hoped he tripped on his pretentious cape." Don't we all, lol? |
thewritingpuss chapter 2 . 10/8/2017 "Thank you very much for the comfortable holding cell." Now there's a line you can really hear in Han's voice (much like the rest of the dialogue!). I like that you had Lando buy them a short return to their suite (as well as her hoping she tripped on his pretentious cape - lololol!). That Han/Leia "remember" moment was VERY nice too (SOB). Also really like that last paragraph. ;) I like that you have Leia changing her clothes of her own volition! I feel like I don't see that very much in fic, and it feels like a really strong choice. |
knitzkampf chapter 2 . 10/8/2017 I like how you handled the change of clothes as a plot contrivance, but also how it sparks all those random thoughts in Leia. |