I don't think being a second year is being a senior, this is like college for them

Interesting weapon for Tai

are you planning in a part two after enough seasons of rwby are released?

phew, no good guy dead: check; school is safe: for now; phyra is alive: a BIG check, cinder is dead: worried check, now we are waiting season4: road to Haven

No Qrow will not be happy

'ello Crusade, I read the first two chapters, interesting concept, I might look into this. But the mateys are worried and to be honest I kinda wanna know what happened, as well as why you left your edgy comment, but it's up to you to respond.
As for your work, I like it, like I said it's a interesting concept, fresh characters, and a plot I haven't read before. Good job.

is there going to be a squeal?

Salem must have grabbed Kagura's body and resurrect her into a Grimm.

Hahaha! Finally, Ruby and Sage are a thing! I held of on reviewing because I wanted to see where this was going, and how you would handle the Fall of Beacon Arc. My thoughts, I am quite impressed, you followed the Canon in a way that, to me personally, it felt like a whole different story. I'm looking forward to seeing how you handle the upcoming RWBY seasons, as well as any potential stories you may be working on. Fantastic work, and I will see you in the sequel or the next update of a story. Take care.

~ReaperStride

Pretty good so far, but there’s some things I’d like to point out.

First off, some characters use language that’s OOC. Either too much vocabulary (Ruby, Yang, etc.) or too formal (Ruby, Raven, Qrow) or too informal (Ozpin). Some of your sentences don’t seem to flow either; they describe too much or use structures that most people wouldn’t actually use when speaking. For example, Ruby would never refer to someone by their full name and Ozpin would really think carefully about his choice of words.

Secondly, there’s the issue of grammar. Yours is pretty decent compared to other stories, but there are a few problems with punctuation and word choice. I notice a few run-on sentences too.

Overall, a pretty good fanfiction.

OVERALL: 7/10
GRAMMAR: 5/10
STORY: 9/10
PREMISE: 10/10
EXECUTION: 8/10
STAYING IN CHARACTER: 6/10

Great chapter, but where's the part where Adam took off Yang's arm, and Raven's "missed-judged sword swing?" Neither are mentioned until the safe area scene.

I like that Ruby killed Cinder and if Ruby has terrible nightmares about killing Cinder, I'll like it even more.

Not bad. Keep it up.

will pyrrha survive the battle of beacon

Pyrrha was also being screwed with by Emerald, but if she had been fully in her right mind she'd probably have realized that Penny couldn't have that many swords in her pack.