Aku-Aku puede sentir que pasa algo inusual.
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Aku-Aku can feel that something unusual is happening.

Coco está muy confundida justo ahora.
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Coco is very confused right now.

¿Qué le sucedió a Coco?
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What happened to Coco?

After a long hiatus of reading fanfiction i'm back and I am glad to see this through... amazing work

Nice job! I just wonder what the bad ending would be like...

Why yes, I am still here reading this. It almost kind of sucks that it's over, because it was one of those things that I looked forward to. Oh well. Good job!

I kinda expected this... but it'seems interesting also I see what your doing there.., Coco is essentially a Poltergeist right now wonder if Crash will be able to see her ghostly figure soon cause Aku Aku and Uka Uka can sense her spirit

It doesn't matter if Cortex has Crash on his side or not, because NOTHING WILL STOP THE US AIR FORCE!

... I'm sorry, I'm tired. Great story.

Oh, all that suspense! I bet it's gonna climax on the next chapter.

Where is the next chapter?! What is Cortex really up to!?

See? I knew it was gonna be Cortex! But I didn't really expect this move from him. Can he really help Coco, or is this another old trick of his? Waiting for the next chapter!

I don't know what to expect at this point, but I hope you get Cortex's animal minions involved in one way or another. This is still interesting.

Wow... good job... so heartbreaking... I feel for Crash...

Oh... Coco's soul can interact with Crash through his dreams... cool

Well... poor Crash... at least Aku Aku knows that something is with them...