"How…" I struggle for words. "How haven't I found this yet?" I ask in awe. "This is magnificent, it reminds me so much of home!"

The rasp of metal on leather greets my ears in answer, Hector drawing a knife as I whip around to face him. I glance from the blade to him, to the slow grin on his lips and the sunlight glinting off the weapon.
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I really thought Hector was going to kill Marina right then and there lmao

Yeah. She's right about the Mogadorians not being from around there. They come from a whole different galaxy

Four and Three really hate each other

Love how even the Mog weapons get expanded on. This story definitely has more lore than the actual books haha

Baby girl Marina practically said screw Adelina. She's going to get trained by Hector lol

Nobody:

Three: *Elects himself as leader out of nowhere*

The sexual tension between John and Six though lol

And the old guy at the motel is such a champ

Marina cursing. Never thought I would see the day lol

Yes Adam. Crazy does run in your family

Revenge time :)

And I love how Mogadorians actually get expanded on in this series

I really need to catch up on this series haha. But I will. And I'm still eagerly writing my own LL fanfic actually. Looking forward to your next chapter. Also looking forward to reading the five chapters that are here haha. Keep up the good work, DN

Hi! I'm a LL fic writer here. One of the ones actually updating even now. Well, I'm sorry to say that I've never read your fic and I don't plan to. Still, I believe you're a great writer as far as I know. But, I'm just not a OC person. Your fic's based on three, right? And three died so quickly, there is no original three to write about. It makes your three an OC. No offense, but that's why I can't read it. Sorry for that. Aside from my No-OC policy, I think your story would be very good.
And I'm so happy that another person is writing here. It was so lonely, only two people in this fandom. BUT (Sorry there's a 'but' waiting) I agree with the person who reviewed beneath me. I won't day no if you keep updating this. I'd be HAPPY if you continue. But you'd better write another story, in a better fandom. Just a suggestion. I... personally have something with thus fandom. So, I keep writing when no one else does. I don't reccomend it, though.
Maybe one day, I might read your fic. Hope you got the inspiration to continue!
-Archer5210-

Hey sorry for my last review.

I hope you know you're still an amazing writer. Just lost my cool when I should've been nicer.

But yeah. Cussing out silent readers hurts everyone in the end, even yourself.

With my original work, and most of my works really, most of the readers are silent. And somehow that made me learn patience and gave me the belief that someday vocal readers will stream in.

I'm a LL fanfic writer here too. And I'm going to shift my focus away from my story. I want to get back to my original work 100 percent. Fanfiction, especially Lorien Legacies fanfiction, isn't for me. It's just not worth it anymore.

In my opinion, I think you should try your hand at original stories. Maybe even write your own bestselling novel. I feel that suits you more than writing fanfiction that just leaves you frustrated. Though I am happy you updated, I think your writing skills will be more useful for an original story or novel.

I post my og story on Royal Road. No vocal readers yet, but one day I will get some. I'm not much of a novel writer anymore. Just an online one these days.

Of course you can still write this fanfic. But I highly recommend you start an original story or actually try getting a novel traditionally published. Definitely feel like you have potential in those setups.

Just remember being humble goes a long way. As writers, we are wise to not lash out at anyone. Definitely not when others can see it as well. Though your anger is understandable. I think fanfiction isn't for you. You seem like you would have more joy at becoming an actual author than stressing over a dead fandom story.

My life has been down in the dumps lately as well. But my original story keeps me going. And one day I want it to have fans, memes, discussion threads, everything. The same can happen for you if you start your own original story or book series. It won't happen with LL fanfics, sadly.

You don't have to take my advice into consideration. I just believe you can do better if you were writing original fanfiction.

Seriously not good to just cuss everyone out like you did. Being humble goes a long way. If it bothers you that you have so many silent readers, then just discontinue the story instead of lashing out at everybody.

Looking back, I was a fool for being a fan of your work. Even the holding your stories hostage until you reached a certain amount of reviews was awful.

Honestly, just stay away from writing if not receiving feedback bothers you so much.

I agree and I love your story please take time for yourself tho we writers doin this shite 4 free

Annnnnd I deleted my fanfic

Really the no audience thing in this fandom is a buzzkill. I only wish I cashed in during that golden period between The Rise of Nine and The Fall of Five's publications.

Honestly, I'm disappointed. I feel you came up with an amazing story, but the fandom died and no old or new fans will come. It's depressing and agonizing.

Not to tell you what to do with your life, but LL fanfics aren't worth the time anymore. We should opt out of them while we can. There's just no real fandom anymore.