Reviews for UltraMoonStar's Pokemon Lemon Collection
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
There are only 2 genders u faggot degenerate
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2019
do swampert x gardevoir
Neovilus Alpheim chapter 8 . 11/29/2019
Yo, I'm still around lol! Dang that's a LOT of ideas! I so dig that Female Titan and Frisk x Toriel ideas XD No, probs bro just do it at your own pace. I too am guilty for a more-than-a-year-long writers block due to... well... life. After all, what's the point of a chapter rushed or if it becomes a chore; it'll creativity and takes away the joy of writing.

Lookin' forward for those chapts and ideas, whenever you're ready! See ya next chapt, Capt!
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tomytheawesome chapter 7 . 11/10/2018
Well if you're gonna write about hitmonchan... Make him submissive like noivern... Idk why but I kinda like it lol
Fagbutt chapter 7 . 10/10/2018
Fem Xerneas x male explorer

Scenario: Our main man, Chance, is an avid explorer and laughs in the face of danger. A climbing trip takes a turn for the worse when a landside sends him plumiting to his doom, he awakens later to find his dick being felated by the legendary pokemon of life; she's simply doing this for pleasure, not because there's a prophecy that says he will be the one to help bare the child of a new era, not at all

Fethishes: female domination, oral, anal, orgasm denial, sudden anthromophism, impregnation
RKType-0 chapter 7 . 10/5/2018
I did enjoy it, it's quite good! I mean, there aren't any fics of a submissive Noivern... but I'm still glas you did this! (I shouldn't blame you for some of the word errors I spotted: you did say it was late, after all...)

You don't mind if I were to PM requests, do you?
PyroSolracIII chapter 7 . 10/4/2018
If only these stories were their own stand alone entries, and not under just one.
RKType-0 chapter 6 . 9/2/2018
I'm glad that you're back! Well... here's to you finishing up the requested chapters! Hope to read it soon!
Paradoxicle chapter 5 . 6/2/2018
Yes. Oh yes, another lemon series! And even updating!
Rotciv557 chapter 5 . 5/27/2018
Nice little collection of lemons you have going here. Great grammar all throughout and each chapter has an excellent pace and length for a lemon fic (seriously, some of the PWP Pokemon fics in this site can get ridiculously long and its honestly absurd to read through).

The only critique that springs to mind is that perhaps you could dedicate a bit more into describing the body of each mon that comes up, like how you mentioned Franky's surprising curvyness in her chapter or how you emphasized Audino's ass in this one. Don't go too crazy and/or flowery when describing them though, just enough to more properly and directly convey the sort of body type you imagine the girl having in each chapter.

I will be keeping an eye on this one, and you can expect my PM to hit you with my request in a few.
Neovilus Alpheim chapter 5 . 5/25/2018
Dat last part... such a beautiful nope XD

Well, gotta say it's an awesome one shots but I spotted a few things that needs improvement, but mainly it's the pacing for the 'action' scenes. Like, I think you can make it a tad bit longer you know before reaching climax, no? For me it was kind of a bit too fast (one paragraph he started, the second he nearly finishes, third paragraph he finishescontinues til 4th or 5th paragraph)

I don't know though, this could be just me. Other than that I think its already great.
Hope to see more and I'm gonna sent you a request, lol.

See ya next chapt, Capt!
:v /
thor94 chapter 5 . 5/23/2018
could you do futa pokemon on male trainer?
and some dominant (and top) male pokemon on male trainer? (like lucario, zoroark or even the new zeraora)
Neovilus Alpheim chapter 5 . 5/23/2018
Yo! Just binged read through all of them and I gotta say it's great!

From start to finish is rather cool and unique and I really hope you use ideas that uses other pokemon that the mainstream ones like the swampert or scrafty... really I dont think I've seen them anywherein FF and if it exists I didnt know.

Anyway, there's just a slight problem with this one. I don't know if it's just me or what but the 'action' scene seems too.. I don't know, quick? Like, it's not too short per se but I just have this sense that it feels rushed a bit. Like you could've added more paragraph so you don't actually get to climax too quickly.

Other than that it's great! Hope to see more and I sent you a request lol. Look forward to more!

See ya in the next chapt Capt!
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Metalinsanity chapter 3 . 2/17/2018
Hm got to say dont see many swamperts or scrafty pokephilia fanfics if this continues with pokemon that are used very little/never this could be one of my favorites
WalkinOnTheSun chapter 1 . 2/10/2018
I have a request:

M Trainer X Nidoqueen & Nidorina

A lucky trainer has a threesome with a MILF and her cute daughter.
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