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Thank goodness everyone is safe! John did a good job making sure that Kim was safe and felt protected. Looking forward to the next chapter! Post it soon :)

How very romantic... Love this chapter!

Aw- John wanted to teach Kim how to swim- so sweet!

They say that boys tease the girls they like... Perhaps romance budding between Dawn and Gary? Haha. But in all seriousness, I like this chapter. It's fun to see kids just being kids! And I like the dynamics between all the characters.

Hmmm... Could Gary be a little jealous of Dave? xD
Ballroom dancing? Sounds like this is going to get very interesting!

Haha- Gary cracks me up! This is a really good chapter! And my favorite character makes an appearance! Excited to keep reading!

Awesome.

I never thought about Kim and John as a paring before!

Awww love the story chapters are kinda short though please update soon!

Awe how sweet of him teaching her how to swim!

Well, I won't lie when that the first thing I noticed when reading your story is that it desperately needs a grammar check. There's so many grammatical errors that the story can sometimes get rather confusing. I recommend a proofreader or a proof-reading program.

But, despite the many errors, it's still a good story. I like that how, for once, the story is directly focused on the humans rather then the Care Bears themselves. That premise is really interesting to me. So, yeah, your story is really good, though you should really take up the suggestions I listed above, since grammatical errors do tend to take the reader out of the story.

Awwwwww
Great writing,great story this is completely adorable!

So cute!