Reviews for Trapped
MikeAlphaGamer chapter 4 . 1h
As RWBYN always been this level of asshole, or are they just being exaggerated?

At certain point being noise turns into blatant invasion of privacy.
HenryTheGreenEngine3 chapter 13 . 5/21
bruhh, the fact you're the reason Laid Bare exists makes me likes it more
HenryTheGreenEngine3 chapter 13 . 5/21
Aw, that's the way Tuscan goes out? I really liked the guy.
hapyjohn chapter 14 . 10/26/2019
this was great
Calamk chapter 14 . 6/5/2019
P of the best White Knight stories I've read. While I would have enjoyed them being trapped in the wilderness for long I content with the direction this story took. I'm happily surprised that I like the OCs with played a major role in the story but kept their distance from the spotlight. Great story
ReavesTheReader chapter 14 . 8/22/2018
Dammit... I need more WhiteKnight. XD

Great ending. Lacked impact but it's better considering it's a time skip ending rather than a 'to-be-continued' one. Nice fluff. Much love. Such wow. XD
ReavesTheReader chapter 12 . 8/21/2018
A Semblance that grew to counter an existing one... boy needs a hobby. He's obsessed with that family too much.
ReavesTheReader chapter 8 . 8/21/2018
I like the sleeping. Absolutely fluffy. XD
But that Sterling... just how many screws loose is this dude?
ReavesTheReader chapter 7 . 8/21/2018
Hate it is.
ReavesTheReader chapter 5 . 8/20/2018
Aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
ReavesTheReader chapter 4 . 8/20/2018
Woah, wait! WTF?! Girl, when your sis said to 'go for it', she didn't mean to crank it over eleven! XD
Guest chapter 3 . 7/25/2018
Amazing story so far!
Axccel chapter 8 . 7/9/2018
Yes, Dirge is not worth the chase. Comforting Ruby is more important than stopping the psychopath for coming after her again for revenge. My sarcasm is oppening a hole in reality, so heavy it is.
Axccel chapter 7 . 7/9/2018
Dirge is a nice idea, except not feasible in Remnant (or anywhere else). Someone like that would've been hunted down and killed long ago. Pretty quickly, too, in a world who relies on its hunters for survival. A threat to them would be quickly hunted down and cut down.
Axccel chapter 5 . 7/9/2018
That was adorable and good interactions for them.

It isn't really all that surprising the girls would listen to Jaune. In Initiation he basically led the combined teams. Other times they've worked together he's been at the heart of their leadership and strategizing. They listen to him automatically.
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