This was good, I would love another chapter or two showing them listening to the wireless and when the war is over.

I would like to see this continue. There seem to be few Dudley stories during this timeframe. Mpst seem to be during the previous six Hogwarts years or much later when they are adults.

at least Dudley is starting to think about what is going on

Love it so far. I hope you continue it :)

Wow well done so far. I have never seen someone take on the "what happened to the Dursleys" after the exit in the book when Harry comes of age.

oh this one is great too :D

A good start on a story that looks to be very different than the usual Harry Potter story. Your writing is easy to read and going from one character to the next is easy as well.
Good job!

Wow, I thought about writing about Dudley for the assignment too, but damn, that was good. I won't even try to follow int those footsteps. Very well written, nice characters, flowing and interesting plot - you've managed it all. Can't wait to read more!

Dang, brilliant writing here honey! I cannot wait to read more! ;o)

Nasty shock for Dudders. It's good that he's growing out of the spawn his parents raised him to be.

I just realized this was just posted an hour ago, love it so far btw

Ahhhhhh Pleas update!

Interesting. I look forward to seeing where this is going. Update soon.