Love this

it's been a year since you've updated. please come back. this was an amazing beginning. I would really love to see where this story is headed.

I absolutely love what you have so far! The story is off to an incredible start and I'm already hooked. Can't wait to see where it goes and how the story, relationships and characters develop. Please update soon!

Great beginning, can't wait for more!

great start to what I'm sure will be an amazing story.

Wow! That is an amazing start! I love this! please update again! I am so excited to see where you take This!

Like the story please update soon

I enjoyed the first chapter and the instant bond Lily and Hap has. Cant wait for the next chapter.

I like the instant bond that Happy has with Lilly, that she wants him & only him. Though I felt like it felt forced with OC saying things like "an electric shock like no other." I also felt saying Lilly would never go to any other man, & that her screams "shook the rafters" felt over the top. I think you should just concentrate on the bond with Lilly & go from there, not let it become some crazy ex stalker story or such, just let it be about the characters in the now & let something develop down the line with the OC to make it believable.

Omg! I love it! Happys so good with kids! Can't wait to read more

i need more! i love lily already...finally a female that doesnt like the prince of charming.

Really enjoying this so far :) :) :) looking forward to more

Awesome story! Can’t wait for more!

I hope u keep updating this story.

Love what you have written so far! Can’t wait for your next update!