Reviews for The Black Lodge
burntdream chapter 1 . 3/30/2018
Oh, I haven't review this yet! How remiss of me.

Objectively speaking, this is creepy, it reads as creepy, but it doesn't feel creepy to me, personally. I have no idea why! It's making me giggle at parts, I don't know why. Just, this weird detached amusement, Lenin walking like a woman with secrets in his eyelashes, brings me back to first time he showed up in the train station dressed in Communist finery, I don't know. I feel kinda high kinda drunk but not the drunk I get alone, the kinda tipsy between dances when the music's pounding and everything hilarious and warbling voices going backwards and forwards and I'm not really sure but this is really really weird. Wow is it weird.
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 10/28/2017
Rabbit is as creepy as ever, but you intended it for this one. The Room almost reminds me of the Black Room in Soul Eater. Without the huge piano and more chairs...
Brumalis chapter 1 . 10/17/2017
I didn't quite understand this story but I like it.
It would be fantastic if you wrote more Rabbit x Lily (please? If you ever want to).
Thank you for writing this anyway!
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 10/1/2017
creepy rabbit... o.o
pucflek chapter 1 . 9/27/2017
Do you know that moment when you are very drunk and stare at some TV Show after you got out of one party or another and you see things but your inebriated mind just doesnt comprehend them, yet you have the strange feeling that you are enjoying it despite not really knowing what is going on? This thing is really close to that moment for me. And i did not even drink anything.
infinite eternity chapter 1 . 9/26/2017
whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa trippyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy. anyway that was really cool. awesome work!
ElementalFoxGoddess chapter 1 . 9/26/2017
Ok...all I got here is a Rabbit/Tom/Gil/Lily quadrangle!
Racke chapter 1 . 9/26/2017
It's a very dazed sort of creepiness. And I'm sure there's plenty of things that someone might be able to carve out of it, but honestly I'm too dazed by it all to even begin trying to figure it out.
LunarCatNinja chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
I love it! Rabbit is such an... interesting character. Well done on his creation!
lunamoon531 chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
This was great :D
I think you really did do everything I wanted and I love it, I particularly like that you fitted it into the Demiurge and all the stuff about memories. Lily does forget a lot doesn't she? It may not he important things most the time but I do think that Rabbit is the one who really remembers everything.

I think Lenin being there was nice, added to the creepy vibe that I actually enjoyed a lot.

I liked when the music went backwards and Rabbits dance became more human that way, it's so interesting to think about all these little details and stuff :)

Anyway, thank you again,
I really enjoyed this,
Hope you have a absolutely lovely day,
Love,

Lunamoon~
SernaJ chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
I love the confusion in the comments. They don't know what they're missing, hehe

I never knew I needed a Twin Peaks crossover. Now I do. Shit. Could you, uh, consider that maybe?And to think I almost ignored the notification that you published a new story...
ericwinter chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
Okay, I'm fairly lost here, but one thing is absolutely for certain; Lily should never, ever, be allowed to drink. Or get Drunk. or even stand within twenty feet of any sort of alcohol.
Hallowtide chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
Gah so freaked
Thoth19 chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
I'm pretty confused. I don't know where this happens in the timeline. or what happened
Elliot Green chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
I am... mildly speechless. Very confused. I can't decide whether my disbelief is over someone requesting it or you writing it.

Your style is always fun to read though.