| Reviews for Uzumaki Naruto: Dark Elf Queen's Harbinger |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/14 I hope there are more chapters on the way I love this story |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/31 Cant wait to read more |
 DainBramagedMoFo chapter 43 . 5/22 Plot blessings are working for the fox empire. The science dudes were thankfully stupid. Uzumakis need superior technologies to go with powers. Where is the air superiority? Be well and stay safe. |
| DainBramagedMoFo chapter 42 . 5/22 No advance warning systems? A watch tower to see far to the horizon? Lame. . Take care. |
| DainBramagedMoFo chapter 41 . 5/22 Just two spies with no thoughts of developing advanced technologies similar to their Kaiju summon. Be well and stay safe. |
| DainBramagedMoFo chapter 40 . 5/22 Hotels can be deluxe, motels are trash mostly. Where are the 9 Nazgul? Why aren't there more evolved wives? Take care. |
| DainBramagedMoFo chapter 39 . 5/22 Where's the being smart? Send scouts, invent drones to know the enemies. Be well and stay safe. |
| DainBramagedMoFo chapter 38 . 5/22 Why aren't the fox's loyal wanton girls already his evolved fox ladies? Take care. |
| DainBramagedMoFo chapter 37 . 5/22 That seemed very Stargate like. It seems to me that once Gaara's mind is better, they'll bring over his siblings together in Uzu. Thanks, take care. |
| DainBramagedMoFo chapter 36 . 5/22 After broken, these prisoner girls are his loyal concubines. He should have rewarded his loyal girls before empowering the dungeon WOmen. Backwards. I love this Stargate addition, tho the empire needs more technologies. Thanks, take care. |
| DainBramagedMoFo chapter 35 . 5/22 The Fox Emperor has a weak court. Where is the harem of powerful evolved Kyuubi wives before he creates courtesans and slaves? Spy technology, all advanced technologies are being ignored. Be well and stay safe. |
| DainBramagedMoFo chapter 34 . 5/22 Where are devices for spying in every village and nation's capitals? They already lost the dark elf kingdom from not having eyes with ears everywhere. Do they not learn valuable lessons? It's disappointing if they allow a cornered rat to bite them. Why is it taking so long to evolve wanton adoring WOmen? He's going to start his concubine forces evolutions before he makes loyal evolved wives in his harem? So much here is backwards and adding idiotic problems easily avoided. Be well and stay safe. |
| DainBramagedMoFo chapter 33 . 5/22 The Scorpion King too funny. It reminded before someone interrupted, I was thinking of the Terracotta Warriors from the other Mummy movie that is far east Asian based. LOL! It's good chapters. Glad the dungeon guests are now being brought into the acts of this play. Thanks. |
| DainBramagedMoFo chapter 32 . 5/22 Was Smaug flying above just in case he needed to reinforce the team at Waves? There is still time to save Kurenai and the other girls, if any are left. Thanks. |
| DainBramagedMoFo chapter 31 . 5/22 Kurenai just needs to be knocked out and brought over. I really like that girl. Thanks. |
