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Oh my god this was so good! It's so well written, and everyone was portrayed so great! I could definitely see this happening in an actual episode! Also that whole forest scene? The argument? The death. Wow. Just fantastic. I love this so much, thanks so much for writing it! :D

Hiya! I'm new to this site! I found it after years of searching! Man! I wish Monsuno was still here! And sorry to say that I'm a Beyal and Jinja shipper! Dax and Jinja is good too, but I don't support it! Great one shot! And did that really happen to you? XD! It'll be funny if it did! I wanna sign up too! But I dunno how :( can you please tell me? I'd really appreciate it! I also wanna write Monsuno fabrics! And guessing from this fan fiction, you probably watched till season 2, but, you never see Beyal and Jinja kiss, well, that's my theory, Bye! And please tell me how to sign in!
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ugh this is so gOOD, i love how you write dialogue and how well you characterize everyone, its incredible! I can't wait to see more things from you!

I liked this oneshot. Well the rabbit dying was sad but the other part was good. Even if the feelings of Dax in the end had a bitter vibe. I also liked what Beyal told to Dax and see that he knows and understands more that he is letting on. Good work. if youl right more Dax/Jinja it would be nice.