Reviews for RosePool
nopeite nopeite nope chapter 8 . 7/5/2019
rules of being a author: not update in even fucking longer
ethan.lukkar chapter 11 . 11/14/2018
Magnificent chapter can’t wait for more please update soon
Disabled-doctor chapter 11 . 6/28/2018
Meh
D3ADPOOLK1d chapter 1 . 6/15/2018
This needs more It’s too good to stop and Torchwick neeeeeds to have I slow painful agonising death for the things he and cinder has done to ruby. Ps I love this story so far it’s great and the humour is hysterical
Luna chapter 10 . 6/8/2018
Aaaaaaaaaa why is this so good!
nitrolugia chapter 1 . 1/25/2018
You know these rules are things you shouldn't do, right? These are high-quality sarcasm of the highest quality.
nopeite nopeite nope chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
rules of being a author. not update in fucking forever.
LONE RANGER 97 chapter 9 . 11/15/2017
Can't wait for the next chapter
Raygha Raikouga chapter 9 . 10/26/2017
Really amusing so far. Hope this rosepool oftenly reference other franchise like most Deadpool Chara in here :D
nopeite nopeite nope chapter 9 . 10/17/2017
rules of being a author. completely throw out common scense and cannon after changeing the story and have it not make sense. I'm talking about your a/n.

im resisting the urge to kick the nearest seagull because this story's self awareness is so HIGH!

ozzy my boi. that's a new one.

"I ship you guys now" too bad you are getting shipped you with ruby already you weird voice.
Shadow Joestar chapter 8 . 10/15/2017
KO awesome chapter, well seem Ruby is going to be hanging out with her robotic friend for while until they reach Beacon hope it doesn't turns into crazy situation.
nopeite nopeite nope chapter 8 . 10/15/2017
You didn't break or follow any rules. other than its a smol chapter.
nopeite nopeite nope chapter 7 . 10/7/2017
rules of fanfic. have all fight scenes be almost the same as the show but change little and have the one person who wouldn't back down back down first in the face of law guys and then not tell us what happened to the pool.
nopeite nopeite nope chapter 6 . 10/7/2017
rules of being a fucked up reviewer. accsadentaly start shipping the main character with the voice in their head. shit.

*at wits end with all the bs with the self awareness*

rules of fanfic. be inconsistent with your character's motives. first she wants to be discrete now she's following the other main characters. the hell?
nopeite nopeite nope chapter 5 . 10/7/2017
rules of fanfic. have a tiny authors note telling the reader things the dont really need to know.

rules of fanfic. keep the gun physics really vague so no one asks why they have fired hundreds id rounds out of their guns and have never reloaded.

rules of all story's really. kill off a side character that isn't even that bad and people sorta like to elicit a emotional response. and fail to do even that. I'm talking about Perry. if memory serves he's on the train.
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