It was good but stupid, the story seems very forced especially I spent it of harassment having a respectable but powerful peculiarity over time. I pass reading but luckily this is my limit.

Just request though

Can i request a harem(comedy) with a slightly little romance in it? Just like Fire Forces
Not like others fanfic (maybe) that Izuku just start dating all the girls or do some smutt activities with them.
I just recommend some light writ, no complicated just make Izuku a dense embarrassed man with some hint that a lot of girls like him(but he don't know) and a bit romance with all the girls and just like other harem anime, he will yet end up with someone's in it. And just that's, its not will disturb you story or even the cannon at all right?

You not make him say "Deku dess!"
I hope you make more of his own quirk progress and a lot of humor coming soon ahead.

Dude!..right?
I always touched when his Dad interactions with Izuku(i always want to to cry..wantand i feel like its the only fanfic that his father is just...his FATHER and that's is what's i mostly like about it.
You know not Al*mumble* or even One *mumble*all...as his father...Keep it going brah!
And let's hit next chapter!

That Dad and son bonding scene, i hope it's will change the story like "Butterfly" effects should do like others story i read...
Well, let's see more!

This story reads like a rough outline.

KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK! I wonder what will happen next. . .

So far this is Boku no Hero Academia light novel version...

so we didnt get to see izuku fight nomu ... bummer also wow this took ages to update I'm sorry

The fact that Izuku is still bullied by everyone despite having a decently powerful quirk seems forced to me. Half of the students in that classroom had quirks that were far less useful than what you gave Izuku, and yet none of them were being bullied. It seems like you're trying a bit too hard to keep circumstances the same as canon.

Please make more of this! I love it so much that I can't wait for the next chapter

I was hoping izuku would just have his own quirk and use it to become a great hero instead of always having all might give em one for all. I guess that's the only way to get izuku and all might to be close or something

Nice work on this

Here comes the USJ, I wonder how it will turn this time.