for someone who's never written smut before, you did a good job!

Yes yes yes yes yes!Love this first chap. Please continue with this, it can only get better

Very good smut surrounded by a very well thought out story which is always the best combination anyway.

i freaking LOVE this!

I hope you are doing a whole story, not just a one-shot. I loved it!

Holly freaking crap I totally freaking love love love love this freaking awesome FIC! I hope you continue it!

I'd like to see you continue this ! Such a good start. So many opportunities. Still sucks Emma got the cold shoulder and kicked out after Regina forced her to admit her feelings after Emma helped her out like that. A pair of underwear woulda made me feel like a booty call.. not that she was in love with me too

Very nice. Just wish it wasnt a one shot

I thoroughly enjoyed this! It was a pleasure to read, evoking a myriad of emotions in me, even though it was was only a one shot. I was sorry to see it end! Even if I did have a smile on my face. Thank you for sharing your story!

Very good writing...would be a good multi-chapter fic :)