jormungand reference, nice.

Both. Both is good.

well dame i did not see that coming, i thought watts would be it causing trouble all around but it could be more interesting now. i hope you do something similer to professor arc by going in as a counselor or teacher assistant so that you can go along missions and recruit/info broke while oz just thinks you just share similarity to jaune arc since it's been years and there's bound to be similar look people

Holy grammar mistakes batman! This fic is refreshing, I have been dying to see more Knightfall stories after season 3 and Pyhrra's death (oddly enough) and this seems to be a Knight fall story worth reading. The plot is questionable and tad bit played out, but alluring nonetheless, again, one problem. Fix the grammar please. Besides that, keep up the good work and continue the fic good sir!

I love it so far, I like the ocs too. can't wait for the next chapter :D

keep the oc's and you should do the shadow seer and the arc family

As interesting as the concept of the story is, I absolutely HATE it when Miles or anyone from RT and CRWBY are directly used as a name in the story, it just shows a lack of imagination of a lack of effort. Call the two Vale PD officers Joel and Burnie? Sure, that's a cameo at worst, and a good joke if done well. Using Miles as an alias for Jaune is just awkward at best and an RT circlejerk at worst, and quite simply it breaks any immersion and suspension of disbelief I have for your story. Aside from quality of writing, those two things are the most important parts of a story. If you can't convince my brain to abandon thoughts of reality in favor of focusing on your plot, then you've already failed. I'll give the next chapter a shot, but I'll be dropping the story if things like that keep pulling my focus away from the plot.

A small event with Jaune and Cinder
Great work

I want yo see the omake of The shadow seer and the Arc family

Really enjoying this so far. Keep up the good work !

Ok, now this is getting interesting. I love the twist of Jaune meeting Roman, Neo, Emerald, and Mercury before hand. Can’t wait to see how everything plays out.

Great job on chapter 4 plz keep up the amazing work

This is such a good story please continue to write more on it !

I died. Jaune is blonde and has blue eyes, and he goes by the nickname SS

The only moment I'm really curious on is Winter. Neo making people scream usually ends with death or them changing their mental process.