Thank you!

I like Mary here. Nice story, well written.

super! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

That was brilliant! Thank you, I needed a story to perk me up :-)

This was hysterical! Go Mary, bravo! I particularly liked "though she generally did not like smiling". So accurate.

This is a great interaction. Mary is one of my favourite characters in P&P.

I love this. Go Mary!

Amazing and funny

I loved this! I loved the comparison to Mrs. Reynolds!

Cute one-shot. I quite liked it.

I love Mary and honestly I would’ve loved to of read more about her in the book. So honestly I really appreciate this, especially a protective little sister feelings.

good for Mary.

This is FANTASTIC! Thank you. I am thoroughly entranced by this little tale. Thank you.

This is very sweet. I love stories wherein Mary asserts herself. Nicely done!

Love it! This is great!

i thought this was a mary darcy pairing ugh darn you almost got me so happy thinking it was but sadly its not would have be more amazing if it was a Mary Darcy but its your story it was okay but ugh why no one writes mary / darcy fics i can see her getting his attention cause she has been told shes not pretty shell never be pretty than her sisters so also i think she is hiding her real figure in those horrible clothing her mother helps her favorites and the other sisters stick in their pairs kat/ly and jan/eliz help each other but mary is always alone and i think she is way smarter than she lets on she is like the quite jane and the smart elize but she knows when to say something and when not to and has a calmer temper than elize maybe she does the things she does to drive people away from her cause her family hurts her with words and forgetting her and not including her until she shows up or someone mentions her and even then its briefly like she has no friends and no parent favors her no sister favors her she is smart so perhaps she is secertly saving money and making things growing things trading selling saving her allowies and knows she will be the one out of all her sisters that will be forgotten and out in the streets so she has to watch out for herself but must be respect to family to not get in trouble even if her family is a pain i could totally she her having more too her like as a business women or is more beautiful then her sisters if she had the right cloths on anyways sorry over writing but thank u for sharing story on here