Please update

loving this story, update soon plss!

SCREEEEEECH! UPDATE PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! IM CRYING AND DYING! UPDATE I BEG YOU!

I need more!
I love your fic! :)

I'm happy to see that the boys are out of the frying pan! And very curious to know what's coming up next; who arranged the kidnapping, what did Clark say, and what is bugging Tim?

For real? After this long a wait you reward us with a cliff hanger?

I'll be angrily waiting for an update.

Mas, por favor.

Oooooooooooooooo I live foreshadowing!
You wote dick concussed really well, like really really well. I haven't read anything from a half unconscious viewpoint that really hit the feeling and perspective well until now

Thanks for updating! I can't wait for the next chapter.

LUV IT. Keep it up.

Oh my gosh, this is so good! Keep it up!

Oooooh what a cliffhanger! I love those! :D I apologize for not reviewing each chapter; I read the first two on my mobile and I don't care to type/write much on that. This is an awesome piece, and I can't wait to read more. Your characterizations are incredible, your dialog is snappy and witty, and I really, REALLY like how you alternate between Dick and Jason, and Bruce, Tim and Damian. Nicely done!

This is absolutely amazing, so wonderful! I can't wait for more!

Only chapter one, but I can't help but wonder if you plan for Dick to escape this head injury with no ill effects afterwards. Unequally dilated pupils means brain injury. The results of those can improve with therapy, but unless the brain can reroute itself, there will be some permanent disability as a result, stuttering, memory loss, coordination, even the onset of epilepsy can occur.

That all aside, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

You know I like your story and storytelling, right? But his name is Damian, with two a:s...

Always a fan of the background noise (the little bits that make a character personal): Tim tap-tap-tapping his bat-a-rang ... Loved it. Love the whole story, want resolution, mas please? Especially more Jays :)