Ton histoire était juste magnifique, j’ai rarement trouver de fanfic avec une progression et une histoire aussi belle. On aime même les disputes ! Franchement bravo pour ce chef-d’œuvre !
Dois-je préciser que j’ai adorée cette histoire ?

God, I loved it so much. It was beautifully written and I am so happy I read it. It was absolutely perfect!

I didn't think I would like this story because I don't read snarrys often but this was great I loved it

An interesting beginning. Now what will you do with it?

Loved your fic - until chapter 20, when I dropped it.

The highlights were the initial getting together part. And your lovemaking scenes were perhaps the most emotional I have read in recent memory. Tasteful without being smut.

The snogging Ginny debacle may be excused for amortentia, but Connor is inexcusable.
Given what we know of Snape's character, it's inconceivable that he would forgive such things ASAP. This is especially the case, since unlike some other fics, this isn't Virgin!Snape, but one who has had prior experience with beautiful women.

Sorry but the whole "It's just a kiss!" never sat right with me.

At least in my Headcanon, Snape is a loyal, brave and dedicated... but he's also insanely jealous. IMO, I wouldn't be surprised to find the werewolf colony "Gelert" being wiped off the map, and Connor in particular spread out over the island in a dozen pieces - after being crucio-ed until Snape's wand arm falls asleep.

Overreaction? Yes.
Will Snape regret this? No.

I have read quite a few fan-fictions now and i have to say this is beautiful. Thank you.

I wish that you bigots would stop turning Harry into a female original character just so you can pair ‘her’ with Snape. And FYI, Hannah sucks. She has a horrible personality.

Great story

Amazingly heart warming story!

I’m going to keep reading for a little more out of curiosity, but I don’t see the sense in Mathilda biting Hannah and then getting herself killed. It absolutely serves no purpose if she wasn’t even going to continue being alive for whatever the heck her plans for Hannah were for afterwards.

Very cute story. I loved it.

Great job. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

This is one of my favorite stories! I hope you write more! It's hard to find a good Snarriet! I will admit that I was afraid Hannah was going to die and that Severus would be a single father. Do you know what you're thinking of writing next?

Well done!

love this end