I am really enjoying this so far! I love Rosie's mother hen tendencies and feel like she is going to end up being the voice of reason for everyone. Looking forward to more!

I think its fine the way it is but if you want to rewrite it its up to you. A little character building never does any harm.

Hi Author!
I’m glad to see that you are back!
As far as the future of this series, I don’t mind it if you leave it as is or rewrite it. I will gladly read anything that you write as you are one of my favorite fanfic writers :)

I would like to see more of the story, but only if you feel like you have the inspiration to continue it. I would much rather you focus on something that you enjoy rather than force yourself to complete a story that you no longer enjoy. Also congratulations on getting your degree.

To rewrite the story is up to you. I personally think this story is amazing and can't wait to see what is next!

hmm... quite interesting...slightly cringe but I'm into it. update soon...

Please update this! I absolutely LOVE how you’re handling Doflamingo’s character. Your story is one of the few that’s got his characterization right. Keep up the great work! :)

I can’t wait to see the next part of this story,will he let her win? Or will he push it to far? And will he find out her past and go crazy? Ohhhhh I just can’t wait

Really loved this chapter! Wish it was longer, but I'd literally read the whole thing in one sitting sooo... Anyway, only thing I was rather confused on was the duel part. I can understand that it'll be interesting and was Doffy's 'mercy', but I was kinda expecting him to put her against his executives or something. Then maybe he'd get involved. But it also seemed rather abrupt for him to jump right to threats because she saw through his plans. I thought he'd be more impressed with her. None the less really good chapter I loved the flow and seeing some of your OC's past. The end just seemed a tad rushed.

Very interesting story. I am curious to see where you will go with it.

I loved this chapter! Enjoying these quick updates. Although I feel like the last bit was a little off for Rosie's character... maybe that's just me? Just felt as though she should have asked "what happened/was wrong" rather than thinking she did something wrong... idk might just be me, totally your choice it works how it is. Anyway, her OCD cleaning purge cracked me up! I honestly do that when I'm tired, procrastinating, or get sick of my messy room. Keep up the great writing!

Hello again author-san! I'm soooo happy that you felt that way about my lengthy review, I tend to go overboard lol...but anyway thank you for another wonderful chapter! The meeting between doflamingo's crew and rosetta was so fun to read, especially their constant surprise and shock of everything lol it definitely made my day picturing it and lastly we get to see the fierce side of Rosetta which is so cool! Looking forward to more of their time together as the story goes on...thank you for sharing this story

So far I'm a huge fan! I'd like a little bit more quirks in your OC's character, but that's all up to you and how you're writing your story and character. I like your pacing so far and it's all really easy to follow. I love the long chapters so keep up the great work! I do hope you also draw a line that even Ms. Rosetta can't cross easily. Like I feel she needs to gain more of Doffys trust and such. Okay anyways, happy writing and I hope writers block doesn't get you like it gets me!

Ok um first off I want to say good job with the chapter was really good and about the drawing well... she looks more masculine than feminine, her arms good length bad width, and the nails could be a little less sharper. So yeah please don't hate me you said before to be honest :'-(

Hello author-san! Long review here sorry! I just wanted to tell you that from the moment I started reading this story I've been hooked. The way you captured the tone of the characters makes it feel as if I'm actually watching an episode of one piece...also it's interesting to explore a unique character such as doflamingo In a romantic relationship with a well balanced character, it definitely shows that someone as sadistic, power-hungry and manipulative in nature is capable of caring or loving another in their own way...plus I adore Rosetta so far she's a respectable noble who cares about her family unlike other noble scum...moving on from that, I just wanted to inform you that I enjoyed what I've read so far and look forward to seeing how this story you