Pls come back, it's the most engaging ark fanfic i've ever read.

I really hope this isn't dead, best ark fanfic in my opinion

I truly believe that Max actually cares about everyone beneath the surface, but it's buried underneath the fear of betrayal due to his family, friends and original tribe making him suffer and abandoning him. I can only hope that he gives them a chance.

can u do a re-write so the main is alone sure he can be with be people sometimes but u make it seem like he is going to stay with them for a long time oh and u still haven't told what happened to the items he got from the supply drop

I truly believe that on the inside Max does care about everyone else, but he's afraid of being betrayed and abandoned, just like what his father, friends and original tribe did to him.

This is my 3rd time reading it and its still it up (:

You need to slap a big ol’ tag on this story.

Keep up the good writing.

That was an...unexpected turn of events. Needless to say, thanks for the chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one!

That was...unexpected. Hope the new chapter's coming out soon!

Damn I hope you can make other faction such as Japanese who used swords to fight like badass and nobilty like culture from different timeline across their era. Also, possible ally for the survivors.

Since I also following this story I'm pretty sure Max will be the wildcard on this story. (I know it's very obvious from that start) I notice this kinds of similar to Fallout:New Vegas we're Six didn't choose to join factions and only himself because none of them will give benifits to his own will. (Lolz, no I think he will rewarded some perks if you choose that option.)

Another thing I add that your story is kind of novel/animeish type to my opinion. In the same time too unique. Because nobody will intend to make a fanfic for Ark since this game is very too taxing too played by every gamers. Further more the whole plot was good! Keep up the good work! And don't drop it.

There was nothing in this chapter I didn’t like!

First we were introduced to a new Tribe in the coastal areas, then Alex and Alice hat their little heart to heart figuring out what to do from their.

And to wrap it all up, the Black Raptors burn down Weathertop Base and capture Angela.

Also, I think this was the first chapter that didn’t have Max in it.

Can’t wait to see were this goes from here, looking forward to the next chapter!

nice.

Great chapter.
I'm getting tired of Milly, and I hope they eat her. Maybe a group of Troodon or Hyenadon, or better yet a Titanoboa.

Max, it's an impressive prowess, and I expect more episity from him, a group of attack raptors, an Argentavis, demons, Wilson becoming a Dodorex for prolonged exposure to an artifact, everything would be great.

The blues are doing well ...

They need to lose a good part of their members. They need ARK to remind them that they are not superior just for surviving a Raptors attack, a T-Rex or two, or perhaps a T-rex and then being hunted by Raptors, it would be a very explicit message, the King needs to appear and the Raptors need revenge.

glad to see you continuing this. I find Max to be a pretty interesting character.

...MY...GOD...!

I mean I knew that something else must have happened to Max to make him how he is, but...My God! It all makes sense now, why makes hate Alice so much and why seeing her happy makes him bitter! It’s because his father and stepmother regularly abused him while they treated her like she was the second coming of Jesus! And this went on alongside the bullying he received at school, so it was probably only a matter of time before he snapped!

I wonder how Alex will react when he learns this.

Also personally I would like to know how the rest of the conversation or rather confrontation between Alex and Angela turned out, and how it ended with her on the ground crying.

Also I like to interpret Max’s nightmares of him beginning to feel remorse for what he did to Alice.

And finally it seems like Golden Hesperonis’s top brass know what the artifacts are really for, and have inlisited the Raptor Queen to acquire them. And to make matters worse, they’ve sent them after, Max, Alex, Rick, and Jericho. The Shit is about to hit the fan!

I did not even know this chapter came out when it did, thanks for getting it out so fast, I can’t wait to see what happens next!