This was a fantastic start well done

Damn this was intense

Oof

Whoa, this chapter was...different. Good job on mimicking the thought processes of a disoriented person. I feel so bad for Percy. What was triggering all those visions? Was it the red man? Who is he anyways? Usually some people water down these kinds of scenes, but you made me feel like I was really there, and feeling the full intensity. But next time if your making these scenes, make sure to retain proper grammar so that your reader doesn't get confused. Great chapter, and I hope you update soon!

What the hell did i just read... Good chapter i guess

Oh my gosh, this is honestly the best chaos story I've ever read! The plot syncs with other Chaos plot stories, yet the way you mold it adds such a unique flavor that I really enjoy. I love the relationship between Percy and Hestia. I could totally see it happening. It's the perfect balance between a great friendship and an awkward crush. At first, I thought Delta was Luke, but having him as an OC was a much better choice. I Congratulate you on breaking free of the restraints of cliche Chaos stories! I love this story so much to the bottom of my heart. How do you only have 5 Reviews?! Please update soon so I can review your next chapter and increase your reviews! :)

Please make this a Percy/Hestia story. You’ve made it so they have great chemistry with each other, it’d be a shame to leave them as only friends.

I’m guessing Delta is Luke. Hope you pair Percy with Hestia since they have such a nice dynamic in this fic

I feel like delta is Luke. Aslo I'm sad about what happened to percy. They shouldn't want to kill him. He was trying to recover Tartarus. I hope he finds happiness again :( also screw annaveth. And nico right now. Actually just all of them who turned on percy.

please make this a percy/hestia pairing. you've set it up so well. can't wait for more

Nice chapter

Really enjoying this so far, please don't abandon this!
Also can you also make the pairing Percy and hestia?