Very sweet!

good story

This was suggested from ffnet on one of my stories and it sounded similar, so I clicked. I loved that this was about the other scar, and it's something I don't often think about as her gets older. You've inspired me to consider using that scar in the future. anyway, I love that the conversation was really for his sake, something he needed to hear and to still heal from. His conversation with Lily was sweet, and I disagree with Ginny, that it was too much for her age. You had him explain it to her just perfectly and it was well done. thanks for sharing.

Beautifully written!

What a wonderful one shot! I loved the way you kept inserting "I must not tell lies" in the story as Harry thought how to answer his little girl.

Okay, I admit, I was a bit surprised that it wasn't a Pokémon story when I opened the email alert of this story, but it was a nice surprise, especially when I read the summary of this story :) I never thought much about Harry's other scar, and it's a nice idea to write a story about it. Especially with Harry's children in it, they're just so adorable haha. Harry's words to Lily were perhaps a bit cheesy (and much too difficult for a four years old, so I'm glad Ginny pointed that out later), but dammit, it still gave me tears in my eyes. I like how Harry doesn't lie to his children, even though he just really wants to protect them from the harsh world. And then Ginny at the end... Harry needed to hear those words himself as well, and who knows, maybe Lily with her 'let's hug things better' attitude will actually change the wolrd for the better. It seems that she'll definitely try :P
Thank you for writing, I liked it, and keep writing! !

That's a very lovely story! Congratulations!

Beautiful

It made me smile, thank you for it.

great job

First and foremost let me just squeal and say that my favourite Pokemon Fanfic author has written the first ever Harry Potter Fanfiction!
I loved the sweetness and innocence of Lily protracted over here. I have read many stories regarding the kids asking Harry about this particular scar but all I have seen in them is resentment and anger after finding out. You have protested Lily differently and instead she wants to give them big hugs to let them know what love is. It really gives the story a different effect. I loved this story! I really did. I hope to see you write more.