Reviews for My Intake on Breeze
3laxx chapter 3 . 11/12/2017
I absolutely loved it!

Thank you so much for finishing the story and for writing it overall! I really enjoyed reading it and it gave me quite a few headcanons for Breeze ;) So thanks again!

I think you did a really good job on this and how you wrote the characters. I'd absolutely love to read more from you! I can see how much thought you put into this fanfic and I really think you have a lot of potential :)

Thanks you so much for writing this, again. I'm really honored you did! 3

3laxx~
LemonzInZeAir chapter 3 . 11/11/2017
I love this ending on this note, I feel like way too many fanfics, that have Mari getting akumatized end up with a super happy ending and not really pure emotions that Mari might’ve been going through. This fanfic showed quite a lot of different perspectives and feelings and Most importantly doesn’t end with Marinette forgiving everyone and nothing ever happened - I like this fic because of this.

As for Breeze, I can’t wait to see how it ends either, but I hope it’s along the lines of this fic’s ending.

Anyway great job, can’t wait to read what you come up with next x3 !
Lokilust chapter 3 . 11/9/2017
Can you write an au of the ending where she tells her parents that she is ladybug and reveals tikki and tells tikki that she can’t be ladybug anymore and that they have to leave right before she doesn’t want to be in a position to choose her family and her miraculous and right before she leaves she reveals herself and tells why and how it happen
Crystalstorm chapter 2 . 11/7/2017
This like Breeze has a great story and idea taking shape and keeping the readers coming back for more. I look forward to seeing where this stories sequel goes and just where Breeze goes next. Ja ne.
Sakuralover4ever chapter 2 . 10/12/2017
Are you still going to update this story? I noticed that it says the story is complete so I got confused.

I LOVE the story btw! In my opinion this is exactly how Marinette should act toward Chat for all the stuff he's done to her. How are her classmates going to treat her after Ladybug's announcement? Can't wait for the next chapter!
GOCKUKAWA chapter 2 . 9/28/2017
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CAN U UPDATE SOON I'M DYINGG
MimicMamba chapter 2 . 9/23/2017
I'm glad to hear that you're going to be returning to writing! You seem to really enjoy it and it seems like a shame to lose the ambition to do something that you seemingly enjoy. I wish you the best of luck and look forward to following the story
Kmbrun chapter 2 . 9/23/2017
I love your take on 3laxx's story. So happy she doesn't forgive. Plus pointing out why she shouldn't accept too! I bet there will be such a turn about on everyone's opinion of Marinette that she gets flowers and 'love' but it's never gonna be enough to actually get her to forgive because the hurt of the past is hard to erase...
I truly like your ending but am so so so glad that you are making a second chapter! thank you xxxxx
sweetestofpeas chapter 2 . 9/22/2017
I really enjoyed your story. My criticism towards the original material is how extreme the abuse gets. And how it's from all sides: family, friends, school. In this day and age, it's difficult to believe that someone, and a 15 year old at that, would be treated worse than a leper. I'm still drawn to the story and I love the premise; I just think the bullying is too much at times. I'm glad you've decided to continue with your story. I think it's time for Marinette to rebuild and it's gonna be interesting how she interacts with the people who claim they love her; and yet, they treated her beyond poorly.
CandyKid123 chapter 2 . 9/21/2017
U can expect me to always be here for support :P
Hope the update comes soon, I can't wait! :)
Just-A-Fan chapter 1 . 9/21/2017
So putting you and this in my goshdarn favorites when I stop being too much like Plagg to login.
MimicMamba chapter 1 . 9/21/2017
Woah, this was awesome! () There were a couple of issues with grammar that I saw but they weren't particularly big and probably just noticeable to me as a native speaker that's had 'proper English' rammed down my throat for the entirety of my life but overall it was really enjoyable to read!ヽ(oo)ノ I loved your take on 3laxx's story and I was glad to see that at the end she didn't just accept everyone's apologies instantly, I think I've read too many stories that ruin their angsty glory by having a fairy tale ending (。T ω T。) but thank you, it was very enjoyable to read! o()o
FangirlplusMax2.0 chapter 1 . 9/21/2017
Ouch poor chat...Are you making another one where chat uhhh proves himself worthy?
Marilenn chapter 1 . 9/21/2017
I really love your take on the last chapter but i really gotta say the ending was kinda left hanging. We have the class issues, chloe's reaction, alya's redemption, hawkmoth's current situation, a scene with wayzz and master fu and the most important... chat noir's thoughts, feelings and actions not to mention adrien's behaviour towards marinette at school, left to figure out.

Its ok not to reply btw. I just had to ramble.
fanakatsuki chapter 1 . 9/21/2017
Came her from archiveofourown. Wish the ending would have been different with her and chat but still a good take.
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