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(No hate)

Awesome story! I'm very interested to see where this story is heading! Please update soon!

Oh no! She got herself mixed up in Will and Horace's fight. Things have definitely started moving along XD I'm excited to see what's going to happen next!

Thanks for the chapter!

Oh boy! Will and Oliver got into a little scuffle.

Great chapter! It was a very enjoyable read. Oooh Oliver has finally met Halt for the first time. I wonder how she will handle her anger.

That lucky duck, getting to know the passcode before getting on.

Agh, yes! I love this so so so much! May I ask if you're open to constructive criticism? I don't want to give it to you if you don't want it, so if it is welcomed, just PM me back. Can't wait for the next chapter because you, my friend, have an amazing fanfiction right here.

YES! YES! YES! MY TWO FAVORITE CHARACTERS ARE HERE!

Ooh, this is good. I really like how you wrote this, and the place you stopped seems so natural. I love it!

Yay a new chapter! Things look like their going to get really interesting really fast. I really like what you have so far! I'm excited to see just how far she'll go for revenge, or will she learn to forgive or let it go before a lot of people get hurt? (Possibly even including her). It'd also be especially interesting if, durring the course of her training, she gets forced into making a really hard moral dicision/ call like Halt did in the mountains of rain and night. And seeher reaction/ see if it makes her understand more what happened between Halt and Norman

Is she going to be Gilan's apprentice at some point, please say yes, i love your story so far. thank you for writing it.

This is great. I love what you have so far, and I love the idea behind the plot. All the characters are in for a lot of problems I think. You have me really excited to find out more.

Thanks for writing!

This is a good start. :) Just a few grammatical errors you might want to fix though.