Good.

Can i just point out this all moved way to quickly and that artemis is too qccepting over this

Nyx is my choice lol

Hhhm. Interesting premise and could use some work on grammar and spelling but otherwise pretty nicely done and I am looking forward to seeing some more.

HOW IN THE HELL does an assassin who was secret come out of nowhere and introduce himself

Good Storyline keep Uploading frequently please

this story's got a good foundation but if i'm being honest it needs a bit of work, you really need to go over it and reread it and improve how you've written some of your sentences other than that, this story has the makings of great fanfic.
hope you keep up the good work.

okay man, this seems kinda interesting

but

first of all, it's recommended to use the word form of numbers. using numbers breaks the flow of a sentence and is generally an eyesore in most cases.

then ... what? first chapter, not even two thousand words in, and the two profess their love for one another. like I get that they knew that they've been around for millennias, but this is way too rushed.

imo, this story could work out, but slow down. no one's pressuring you to print out chapters. take your time

great job!

Can Percy have the blessing of the Big Three; Hades and Zeus, maybe even his father's blessing Poseidon?

This certainly has potential