EXCELLENT! Just read it clean through in one sitting and I LOVED it! Couldn't put it down! Glad to have something this well written to get me through Quarantine.

Again: EXCELLENT!

OMG I LOVE LYANNA MORMONT WITH ALL MY HEART hahahahahahahh

Loved this!

Awesome story thank you for sharing

I loved your story :)
it's a good fiction

So Daenerys is a psychopath in this story.

I like your story but the one thing I don’t understand is why Daenerys has been demonized repeatedly? She is the breaker of chains, she didn’t march on Westeros until every slave inn esss was freed and remained so, so you honestly think she would reply the way she did to Arya in regard to a hungry dishboy? Daenerys cares about her people, that’s the entire point as to why Varys and Tyrion chose to support her. I don’t believe Varys would betray her either, Tyrion would before Varys would and that is because Dany cares about the people. I’m just honestly wondering why you’ve turned Daenerys into this conniving self absorbed queen. And why would Jorah kill Varys?

Not a fan of crazy Dany, so this story definitely wasn't to my taste but was well written otherwise.

Sucks about Varys not really much he could do about where he came from and frankly this seems short sighted. Hopefully he finds some work somewhere was hoping Arya might help him with a lead on who cut off his junk.

Worst show choice to try to name Jon Aegon's name, who was already born.

super xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I was wondering if Missandei would ever come back! Interesting twist!

YES! Lyanna Mormont is the best!

"You're scared of her too."
"Well... I'm not stupid."

Hahahaha!

Wow, villainous Jorah. An interesting take. I like your Tyrion dialogue, I hope there will be more of him!

Also really like Arya teaching Dany more about how to lead, because Dany really doesn't know what the hell she's doing. As Daario said, she's a conqueror. That doesn't really make her a good queen.