This story is on my favorites list, so I decided to read it again. It’s still awesome, and one of the best Outsiders fanfics I’ve read. Lizzie is the sister the boys needed. I know it hasn’t been updated in 15 years, but I will keep hoping for those last three chapters!

it's so strange to scroll through the comments and see some from before I was even born like idk who thought that people would be reading a story for over a decade, kinda like a book

One of the very few 'Curtis with a sister' story that doesn't suck. Rereading it again, I was surprised to see that this unfinished but the last chapter leaves the reader with a good feeling. If you ever do read this, just know it's never too late to start updating again. I and a lot of others would love to read more.

I’m sad that you haven’t updated this since 2005 (when I was born lol) but either way, I still think the last chapter was a good way to end the book, minus the abrupt ending. I have no idea if you’ll even ever see this, but you’re really good at writing and I hope that you’ve made a career out of it.️

This is really good. I can't usually stand fan-fictions and I personally can't stand to write them myself, but I always want to read a good story. I like characters and good writing and get pretty irritable when people screw things up, but I think this is well-written and the characters are incredibly likable. Even if they were pre-created characters, most of them anyways, I think you handled the characters really really well.
I usually write my own original stories, I've never tried writing fan-fiction, but I feel like it would just frustrate me to no end trying to get the characters just right, you seriously make it seem effortless.
If you want to try reading my stories, I have some on , just search for "Apex", "Max", "Respected", or "The Four Sisters" The four sisters and Apex are on suspension right now while I finish up Max and Respected, though. So, it'll be a while before I start posting on those again.

I looked up when the ousiders was set and it was in 1965, so the mustang WOULD have been out, but the stingray convertable came out in I think...68? Maybe...66...not sure. I'm just being nit picky, and wanted to point these out in case that kind of stuff bothered you when you wrote, I know it bothers me.

The first "Mustang" wasn't around until the sixties and I THINK the outsiders was set in the fifties, not sure though. Also, I'm not sure if Gymnastics classes were common in the time frame, I tried looking up the oldest gymnastics school in the US and I couldn't find anything. But, there's also the problem of their financials, of course, if it was before their parents died, then I assume their financials were better off, but they do live in a rather bad part of town-at least, it's not a wealthy part anyways- though, so I'm not sure how "well off" they could have been. Which might be a red flag, considering it says "gymnastics classes" rather than saying she did it in school, so paying for the classes would have been an issue.
Just some things that I noticed.

Hey... I weigh 85lbs and am quite healthy, thank you very much. But...I'm also 4'9" tall, sooooo it evens out

Well written. Fan-fictions are usually terrible to read and hard as hell to get into because of the bad grammar and fantastical instances in them, but this one is actually good. You can tell you took the time to look over it for misspellings and grammar mistakes before hand. *thumbs up*

One thing I noticed... a lot of 'ya''s. As in, "How ya doing?" I don't think I've seen a 'you' yet.

oooooh things getting heated with Steve

btw... this is probably the BEST fanfic I've seen out of the Outsiders fanfics so far. It covers everything, and also, it's go the display of characters right, and it adds more detail than the actual book! Well done. VERY well done.

I love Dally and her

Dude... *sigh* Never thought I'd start crushin on Steve. Awesome fic, keep writing :)

Nice!