I'm really loving this and would love to see what comes next!

Please more. Gracias.

Heyyyy just a heads up, amazing story, but I believe chapter 29 is broken, may want to try re-uploading it? It has a bunch of broken text.

this is formatted weird I can't read it

I'm still interested.

Update, update!

I have not logged into this account in YEARS. I HAD to dust it off to let you know that you are doing the lord's work with this story.

I binged read all 27 chapters so far in the span of a week I was so hooked from the get go. The characters are wonderfully true to form and yet reimagined. The story is compelling and follows the game so well but at the same time really makes it your own.

I am honestly loving this story, you are amazing, it is amazing, and I am really hoping to see it continued. At the very least 1 more chapter to make sure to wrap it up with some closure?

Also Sebby is best husband!

I like it.

Well, this is an emotional rollercoaster that I don't want to get off of (That's a good thing!)

I'm wanting to read more of this wondrous piece of literature.