I never leave reviews, but I love your story so much I just thought I'd let you know! It's really nice to see some actual good stories on this website (it's kind of rare, most other stories are junk). I can't wait to see what happens. I love the characters and their relationships, and your writing is awesome! Your stories deserve so much more attention! (I'm also obsessed with your other Leo story.) Anyways, have a great day/night :))

That was HILARIOUS! I wonder what Piper thought about hearing about her son. . . ?

I hope Milo recognizes Calypso. He should, shouldn't he? She is his mom.

Hmmm. I never thought about the amazhang relationship of Calypso and Hazel. Also handsome*

This was good. But I really wish Calypso could know, because then, she would all motherly to Milo, and that would be hella cute. _

Isn't it kinda dumb of Leo that he doesn't realize that he marries CALYPSO, the girl he PERSONALLY saves from a prison-like island?

I really liked this chapter , it gave me feeeeelsss overboard, man you made it so depressing especially with everything with Calypso which is why I loved it. Can't wait for you to update again!

It’s so sad. ;~; Miloooo!
Also, you added Frank into your story! So many people forget him. ;n;
And yes, I did change my name. ;) Maple syrup is an ice cream flavour? I’ve never heard of that before.
#catsftw, by the way.

Okay definitively you have to make the power swap or the Christmas one, although I have waited for a new power swap for months so I prefer that one. Also, I am a native Spanish speaker and every time you write in Spanish it feels so sickeningly sweet, maybe because I am a native speaker and I don't know but most of the times when I read something in Spanish in an English story I feel it that way, so its just my problem. But good story, I loved how you show more about Leo and Calypso relationship and how Calypso and Hazel are so good friends

“We ride moose and get drunk on syrup!” Haha, nobody even drinks syrup at school, and our biggest animal war is cats vs dogs here in Canada.

I loved Leo's reaction to finding out that they're his kids. So funny! I didn't think I would like this sort of fanfic originally, but you proved me wrong. Keep up the good work!

This is writer's block?! This chapter was so believable, I mean I also can imagine Leo doing things like this as a father, he even had to steal to survive. Incredible chapter and so cute to see another moment father and daughter. Can you make one about Calypso and one of her sons? She is also important.

I didn't think it was bad. One piece of advice (at least I like this), when there is more dialog, it's more interesting. A lot of the time when there is a huge paragraph with nothing but explaining, I just skip to the next phrase that is being said, even if what I skipped is important. That's my only critic.

just so you know, travis and connor stoll aren't twins. but other than that, great chapter. loved the ending.