I love this story! Madara is so tender towards hinata and i love how hinata can soften him up through out this story, and hinata is so bold but still has that shy quality that i love

OMG! finally lol...this was a good chapter. I wish you a merry Xmas and a happy New year when it comes...I hope u decide to write more madhina will be looking out for your updates . happy holidays

Great update!

Just beautiful! Loving this! You made this sound canon instead of crack pairing!

Oh, but you're good at describing this story madahina whether you consider some story narusaku or naruTayu

Finally a new chapter. I'm so happy. The lemon scene's so amazing.
I wonder what Danzo's planning and it seems Toneri would appear in the next chapter.
Thank you for your hardworking and hope you will update soon.

Great chapter! Update soon

Brilliant!

Hot! Daam Hinata has to be pregnant after all that welcome sex lol madahina another great chapter hit me with chapter 3

screaming! lol on my god...I just died an came back lol...this was awesome really

this was really good...I really enjoyed it. I love the pairing also please consider writing a story with madaraXHinata

This was gorgeously written, how are there not 100 reviews!

The most satisfying and moving one-shot I have had the pleasure of reading in a long time. I look forward to reading what else you may write. :)

Oh meu Deus!
Essa fic é tão boa!
Eu amo a Hinata!
Muito obrigada pelo capítulo maravilhoso!

Wow that was hawt! I hope you write more. I see a lot of possibilities if you continue.

It would be sad to just leave it as just a oneshot.
It was a good storyline and crack couple.
You did this story good! Hope to see a 2nd chapter writer.