Wow I love the direction your heading with this story! It’s really enjoyable to read and I love it!:) Hopefully, you update soon its a really good story!xD

I really like this! I think your martial arts angle is really interesting.

For constructive criticism: Sometimes Kaien seems a little *too* into how attractive her teammates are. She comments on it a lot, which can get kind of repetitive. Not a huge problem, but I think if you cut some of the mentions on how hot the boys are, it'd help the story some (obviously you don't have to cut it completely. Just a little would go a long way).

Thanks for writing!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

I love martial arts! For a long time now, I've wanted to learn Wing Chun. The fluidity of the movements is so beautiful and efficient I get jealous. When Jet Li and Donnie Yen perform in the movies, they use the momentum their opponents have built up against them. I also want to at least see in person the kind of martial arts where it looks like you're dancing at the same time. I think it's called Capoera, but I'm not sure. I also think your story is great and funny. You have portrayed Miyuki perfectly from what I've seen of the anime so far. Don't worry; I like spoilers. Kaien seems like she'll be alright because you rounded out her being a martial arts powerhouse with a few problems. I'm excited for the next chapter. Favorite and follow from me.

it seems her father is trying to force her to stop playing baseball. I HATE HIM ALREADY.

love this story

hope you can update soon!

I NEED MORE!