I really hope u continue this!

This is such an interesting take! I really hope you write more. I'm also curious if Law is actually Corason's son, and Law was conceived in rape, or if Corason was just supposed to raise Law, and that's why they have the father/son bond

very good. Poor Roci. He needs a hug.

This is so cool! Love the story and the broken Roci!

it would have hurt less if you had cut out my heart.

Fucking hell. I'm almost crying thanks to you. So fuck you and thank you. It's bloody perfect and I hate it.

AHHHHHH! Please update again! I need to know what happens!

Wow this was a really cool chapter, thank you for updating:)

PLEASE UPDATE! Ahhh! I need to know what happens. I really hated Mingo in the manga/anime, but reading this, made me soften up a bit. PLEASE UPDATE!

Thank you very much for this three chapter. Short but good. See ya !
-Dia

Update please!
So law is roci biological son to a celestial? Im really curious why the celestial dragon would like to have a child to a ex celestial dragon? Isn't it roci only 15?. Thanks please update soon

would I like a third chapter? yes, yes I would

I (and many others of your followers, I'm sure) would fucking LOVE a third chapter.
No pressure though, writing can be really fucking hard sometimes...
(Still fucking love this)
~from a friendly little fan~

Yeaaah ! a third chapter ! Pleassse

More...I wish for more...please...