This was absolutely fantastic and beautifully crafted, I loved every bit of it.

That was...wow. I was a bit sceptical on the premise when I saw it but once I started reading I just could not stop. This story is truely amazing and I thank you for sharing it.

And I'm back... fuck... this one did me in good... I love it. I really do, but damn has this me bawling. If tears were liquor I'd drunk myself sick...

Daaamn! This had me bawling my eyes out. Seriously, this is one of the best written and interesting takes on LiS! Would give it 11. Like 11 out of 10. I just love it. Though that cliffhanger at the end... Damn you're a tease!

Just finished it all in one go. Loved it, got me tearing up a couple times.

Interesting concept you got here.

so I've just finished reading this, it is in the top tier quality of fanfics (heck even books) that I've read... I thought some dialogue in chapter 8 between Chloe and Mr. caulfield was very ehh but that's about the only issue I had with this... it's wonderfully written, unique idea, and makes you want to keep reading.

read this masterpiece in a day... never felt so much joy and sadness from a story. this fanfic... no this story was so original and perfect it really made me cry and laugh at the same time. i loved the way you morphed the lines into place and how strong and cold Max would feel at time for all the timeline she has been through and at the same time to the sheepish pure essence of joy aura she got when she was with chloe XD this story will forever have a special place in my heart. thank you for making this miracle possible :) it was hella awesome!

Wow...just wow. I actually sat and read your story in one sitting, even crying and laughing out loud at times! This story is by far the best I've read of "Life is Strange" fanfics, and dare I say I loved this more than the original story! Heaps more if I'm honest! Ugh, I definitely adding this to my favorites just so I can keep re-reading. I can't thank you enough for this jewel of a story you created; but yes, thank you SO much for finally giving me a "Life is Strange" story I can be satisfied with.

It's always great to see a story finished, especially one you like! You did a great job with this story, and it's truly an excellent addition. I'll even admit that I read the first seven chapters through a couple of times waiting for this chapter (and it was worth the wait!).

What an amazing story.

Hi, I finally came around to write you an review.

I marked your story when it came out because I was fascinated by the idea and wanted to see how you would realize it. Because of my policiy to read principally only completed stories I really rejoiced when I saw that you completed it. Foremost let me say, thank you very much for the hard work you put into this and for delivering us this nice story.

The Story wasn't what I had expected. Still, I was pleasently surprised. It was interesting and good written. I liked your idea and the way you went with it in the storyline. The characterisation of Chloe was quite fitting and the whole relationship between Rachel and Chloe had an intriguing side to it.

But in my opinion the story shined most in the ending. It was really thought trough and emotive. I could completely understand why Max would do something like that and cherished that his time around, Chloe had to make, and life with the decision. She took it off Maxs shoulders. the "logical" or more like understandable point, why Max was where she should have been is on point. And that Max still had to pay a price for Chloes life, Rachels life and messing with time was well put poetic justice, if a bit hard to the heart.

All in all an interesting and gripping time. I went through it in one evening and it was a delightful one. Thank you again for the story and the original idea.

With best regards

Hithilion.

Thank you so much for this story Vengesim! Im so glad you took the time and energy to start this story and then to finish it so beautifully.
Life is Strange to me is the best game Ive played so far because of the intangible emotions it made me feel: like the feeling of lying your head in the lap of someone you trust or the feeling of shared history or talking shit and banter.
But your stories have really added even more emotion in ways I really struggle to describe. Just reading the conflict and darkness within a fatigued Max, or the anger and pain of Chloe and finally an intimacy that the main game never deeply explored. Your character building and dialogue feel more real to me than any other fic Ive read in my post lis depression phase!
So here I am as a nameless stranger, who just really wanted to tell you that its been a journey and I wish I could shake your hand or something but all I can do is write this. Have a hella good life!

Glad you finished it, enjoyed the ending a lot. Felt like a good balance between overall plot and chloe/max stuff. Thanks for writing it.

I absolutely loved this story! It's so heartwarming and just always brought a smile to my face, despite the cliffhangers, lol. You are a fantastic writer and I personally can't wait to see what you start on next. Keep up the phenomenal work!